[fanfic] - Future!AU Chapter 2.5

[purpleicicles]

Yikes, it's been a while since I last posted! Anyway, I have finally typed up chapter 2.5 of the still untitled Saiyuki sci-fi romp and present it now for your pleasure. Contains descriptions of murder and bravery.

Comments

[laurose8]

Thank you for a great bit of suspense writing.

There are lots of things I should single out for praise. Among them are the abductors' leader ignoring his team's welfare, and the forearm blade, and every one of Hakkai's team - bravo, Miss Kee-Ho!

The different youkai languages is a fine idea, too.

[purpleicicles]

Uwaaaa, that's really lovely of you to say so! Thank you very much! ♥

I did try to give the OCs a bit of depth, even if we don't get to see them for terribly long; they may be scientists, but they're not always logical or brave or smart in times of crisis. I think it's weird to write Hakkai as a non-combatant though, because I'm so used to him always having a plan and being so capable in canon!verse... I also wanted to steal bladearm!guy from the manga and give him some brains, turn him into the kind of guy he is in his head, ha ha.

The different youkai languages is a fine idea, too.

Thanks! I guess they would, otherwise the youkai would have taken over the world with their superior communication skills or something...