comment whore

[purplemalkav]

http://www.writerscafe.org/writers/Jaities/

i'm a comment and review whore. so i need everyone to go review my terrible story over at writers cafe. comeon peeps! you know you want too!

Comments

[thehairiestone]

Wow, nice story. I've only read 3 chapters so far, but it's well done. I was pretty much drawn into the story after the first few paragraphs. It's nicely written and flows well. I pretty much read it is as a continual flow barely needing anytime to look back and reread some sentences to better understand them. I would like to know how the fight between Gen and Aaron turns out or what exactly is special about his sword and of course his life growing up in Napaj. I plan to finish the last chapters once I am done with my homework. Nice work!!

[purplemalkav]

thank you very much. ^_^ There is a lot more to post and a metric fuck ton yet to write of it. Let me know if you want me to post more of what I have and i'll do my best to do so.