Oh I love the first-time sex. Loved the fact that Matt was so awkward and apprehensive (completely believable!) and the Mo was the understanding and patient one. So glad they got it together in the end. Such a lovelty end to a great series! Thanks for sharing!
I"m so glad it was believable. It's my first time doing 'first time' sex so I wasn't sure how it would come off. I'm really glad you read it all the way through. Thanks so much for reading!
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This has been a lovely series and now it has the perfect ending :) I love the way you got across all the uncomfortableness and longing of first-time sex, and the descriptions were beautiful...very very hot. Great job! <3
I'm so glad you liked it. especially that you thought it was hot. How amusing! I really, seriously thought no one would every think my writing was hot. especially this one where it's all very awkward and nervousness.
The awkward nerves of first-time sex are part of the hotness, honestly--don't know why, but it is ;) And you did a great job describing it, truly. Thank you for sharing your story!
It was a wonderful story! I totally loved Kyle, he was adorable. If Matt and Mohinder could have a child, it would definitely turn out to look like that.
Great scene the first-time sex, I think you managed it quite well.
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If Matt and Mohinder could have a child, it would definitely turn out to look like that.
Great scene the first-time sex, I think you managed it quite well.
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I'm glad you enjoyed it
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The little boy at the end was the cherry!
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