"The Good Ones More Than Once" (Billy/Dom, New Zealand, 2000)

Apr 10, 2008 09:18

Title: The Good Ones More Than Once
Authors: msilverstar and unstealthy
Pairing: Billy/Dom, Elijah
Rating: NC-17, warning for some S&M
Disclaimer: Completely untrue, absolute fiction.
Summary: In New Zealand, kinky sex is new and exciting, but it sometimes leaks out into the rest of their lives.
Notes For all fics in this universe in chronological order, please see ( Read more... )

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bibliotech May 12 2008, 20:46:15 UTC
I love this! I love the hesitation about how to address something like this, it feels very real to me.

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unstealthy May 12 2008, 21:02:09 UTC
Eee! Thanks for commenting. Glad it feels real - that's a good sign!

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msilverstar May 12 2008, 21:12:43 UTC
Thank you! I find the social issues very intriguing, and it's a pleasure to explore them with unstealthy. Plus, I got to write Elijah and it's so easy writing an American!

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msilverstar May 13 2008, 15:34:31 UTC
Thank you! unstealthy does great dialog and inspires me :-)

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unstealthy May 13 2008, 20:21:57 UTC
Yay, thank you! I love writing dialogue, so it's really gratifying when someone else enjoys it too.

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tweedle_ May 14 2008, 10:34:32 UTC
"Bloody hell!" Dom yells. It's fantastic: the noise, the feel of it. Nothing more happens, however, and Dom looks over his shoulder. "More? Please?"

"Impatient wanker," Billy says fondly, and hits Dom with the slapper again,... They are so good! What a treat. I love that you've brought Elijah into it and am waiting with bated breath to see where that goes. Their banter at the end is wonderful. Just as they should be. :)

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unstealthy May 14 2008, 19:34:53 UTC
Hee, thank you! Glad you enjoyed it so much. It was fun to bring Elijah into it, and I'm thinking about how we can use him more.

I love writing banter :D

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cordeilla33 May 14 2008, 16:32:36 UTC
Wonderful Fic! Just knowing Billy and Dom - they can't keep much secrets from the 'fellowship', well maybe Billy, but not Dom LOL! I loved how much Elijah cared for Dom - almost ready to tell Billy off, for hurting Dom...that was fantastic.

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unstealthy May 14 2008, 19:35:26 UTC
Thank you so much. I'm glad it came over so well! I love writing Dom and Billy together.

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