Slipping (Billy/Dom, bdsm)

[msilverstar]

Title: Slipping
Authors: unstealthy and msilverstar
Pairing: Dom/Billy
Rating: NC-17
Notes: bondage, nipple clips, butt plugs, flogging
Disclaimer: It's not true, it's fiction, we made it up.
Summary: Sex in the morning, pushing both their limits. Billy's voice is stern, in contrast to the gentle way he strokes Dom's balls, and the combination seems to trickle into

Comments

[karin_woywod]

Here on a drive-by visit to satisfy my kinks once in a while. I am not familiar with this universe (other than just having read 'Please Sir'), but I like how well-developed it is. The story is hot, but the characters are not one-dimensional, not archetypal, not predictable.

I especially liked the last paragraph about Billy as the Dominant reflecting about the possibility of himself needing to safeword at one stage during their relationship. I think so much of a relationship, which is entering the realm of bdsm from time to time, is happening in the heads of the participants, and I like all the different nuances, and even different degrees of submission over the course of the 'scene' developing.

Thanks - Again, that was very hot and played all my 'buttons'.

Love,

- Karin.

[unstealthy]

Thank you so much for such thoughtful feedback. I'm so glad the characters come across as having depth, being real and unpredictable. Yay!

Feel free to familiarise yourself with the whole world we've created here - it's taken us a long time, which may be why the characters are so well-developed by this point.

Thanks again for stopping by, glad you enjoyed and it pushed your buttons.