"I would make such a good white parent...admit it"

Nov 16, 2005 00:05

I'm going to start posting poetry. Not the kind with a total lack of English conventions and a concrete format symbolising nothing, but genuinely well thought out poetry. And not song lyrics. I'll probably post a few and then no one will care and I'll become self-conscious and then stop, but like all my plans, I will act as if its the one thing I'm ( Read more... )

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eazy3 November 16 2005, 11:40:07 UTC
how he has learned to beg,
And note the way he hides his sheer delight
My pennies always fall into his cup,
The grease-trap for the system of these trolls

Is this about Dave? Dave is a very normal guy who stands VERY close to the entrance of the local Second Cup, very conspicuously holding a cup out for change.

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(Writing as an advocate of the welfare state) sashasquirrel November 16 2005, 12:31:20 UTC
I found this poem distasteful.

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Re: (Writing as an advocate of the welfare state) the_steve16 November 17 2005, 13:35:14 UTC
no one cares what you think

And andrew, stop trying so hard to give a theme to your journal.
mad love yo

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theprint November 16 2005, 21:07:19 UTC
I liked the bit about the missing legs.

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riyaad_ali November 17 2005, 06:34:27 UTC
Are you still writing Andrew's posts, and then replying to them yourself?

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riyaad_ali November 17 2005, 06:34:51 UTC
Not you Andrea, Adeel.

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eazy3 November 17 2005, 08:35:08 UTC
Stop being so condescending.

Do you think I can write poetry?

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