[fic] the first time

Apr 17, 2013 21:26

warning: rated m for mature shenanigans~

Changmin lets his haughty smirk soften to a quirk of the lips. His gaze lowering from the foggy glass of the windowpane to the soft, warm man in his arms.

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homin, fanfic!, changminxyunho

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snow_meow April 18 2013, 17:07:35 UTC
I bet Changmin was trolling Yunho so that Yunho will respond like he did. ^^

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pwnew April 19 2013, 07:13:42 UTC
ha~ I love the idea of trololol Changmin. pwsh, we all know Changdola loves his Yunbunny~
^-~

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trish3815 April 18 2013, 17:47:52 UTC
I love me some HoMin/MinHo.... thank you so much!

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pwnew April 19 2013, 07:12:32 UTC
You're welcome, thank you for reading~ <3

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holovemin April 18 2013, 21:23:58 UTC
I love this. I read your fics at AFF too. I'm just bad at leaving comments there. >< Thank you, this is so beautiful and sexy. Please, write more. ^^

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pwnew April 19 2013, 07:12:12 UTC
Don't worry dear, I'm the same when it comes to leaving comments (*ノωノ)
I'm very happy you enjoyed it~ Thank you. ^^

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coychick April 18 2013, 23:46:30 UTC
And that is what I call lovemaking at its finest :)

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pwnew April 19 2013, 07:14:41 UTC
;~;
very sweet of you to say, thank you for reading and your kind words. ^^

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cactuzoz April 19 2013, 06:25:07 UTC
My breath stuttered with every words that you have woven carefully into this fic.
The description was so breathtaking that i immersed myself every single time i re-read this fic.
Their love making was so beautifully described and i wanted them to be together forever~

I always love to read fic from shim's point of view. Coz his description was so passionate and borderline possessive.
He really adored, appreciate and love every single thing about his hyung.
my fave sentences will be :

"Changmin has always loved the idea of Yunho unravel before him. Having such a fantasy become real… is almost overwhelming."

and this one

"He plans on taking this slow… but then Yunho immediately arches back to meet him, in a way he’s only seen backstage, watching carefully from behind, or though the mirror of a practice room."

i was left speechless at his secret love years back for his hyung...

Thank you so much for posting and sharing this with us. I hope to read more homin fics from you~~~ yeay~~

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pwnew April 19 2013, 07:20:36 UTC
My breath stuttered just reading the first sentence of your comment.
;~; let me love you~ <3

hee~ and Changmin forever watching his hyung from behind. I don't like to think of it as Min hiding behind his hyung like I've heard from others, rather, he is protecting him from behind, while keeping his attention forward as well. His presence surrounds Yunho, and makes him shine brighter all the same; which is why I love when Min (is always) leans into Yunho from behind, or scotches closer even when there's plenty of space to stand separately. Thank you deary~ will always share if someone wishes to read. ^^

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