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[pyracies]

TITLE: "Space" (or, an experiment in writing a non-obvious sex piece)
PAIRING: Jack & Elizabeth, duh.
RATING: R ..... (see AN)
AN: I'm'a say, though, the sexuality is subtle, so don't expect PWP. I wrote this as an exercise to see how I could write something painfully hot without using any of the obligatory situations &/or porno language... so, uh

Comments

[djarum99]

Once, upon a poverty of flesh, his specter took up a madcap, and unexpected residence

Achingly lovely, and it does read as a character study, as tiamary said, as well as being highly erotic. Beautifully done ♥

[neurotikaus]

very nicely done. I think I need to make some calls now. ;op

[reneeks]

A great piece of work! More from you soon, I hope. Out of curiosity, what was your previous username?? I saw an entry in your LJ about you changing names a lot...so now it gets me wondering if I knew you under a different name...have a great day! And keep writing. :)

[pyracies]

I've been, um, pyracies, obviously, and 5thofnovember, and before that was heroics.... which is why I keep the voilesnoires filing cabinet, since I sort of have a weird OCD about usernames... I get bored easily. ;p

&& thank you!

[reneeks]

Haha. You do like to change your names! I use the name Arraya on most of my sites/accounts, but unfortunately that was already taken on LJ. and on youtube. So I just resorted to using my first name and initials...renee k.s. Ugh. I hate when I can't have the name I want. Thanks for replying!!!

[blacklilac17]

Beautiful piece of writing, I absolutely love it! Very hot and delicious ;) Utterly amazing!

[kseenaa]

That was absolutely lovely!