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Jul 20, 2007 06:41

TITLE: 11 Years Later
PAIRING: Jack/Elizabeth, Will/Elizabeth
RATING: PG-13
SUMMARY: Aha, betcha didn't think I'd be back so soon! Anyhow, here's part 8 in my little drama. I never really do song-fic, mostly because I feel that it's a really fine line to tread, making it work, and actually incorporating lyrics into the overall mood, but I couldn't ( Read more... )

its nearly 7am, fanfic, sparrabeth

Comments 22

freelke July 20 2007, 20:56:28 UTC

SOOO good, I can't wait for the next installment. I love this story

pyracies July 21 2007, 18:01:29 UTC

Thanks!

ladyxxliz July 21 2007, 04:15:42 UTC

Another wonderful chapter. Very eagerly awaiting the next one :)

pyracies July 21 2007, 18:02:03 UTC

I'm very eagerly awaiting inspiration for it. XD Thanks for reading!

djarum99 July 21 2007, 17:43:17 UTC

*Guh* pitiful confessions - lovely.

This is wonderful, just read it in its entirety and can't wait for more. The structure is fantastic, and I can't count all the phrases I fell in love with. Brava!

pyracies July 21 2007, 18:03:20 UTC

Thank you, thank you! I really do love when someone I've read m'self enjoys something I've written, so yes, thank you. ♥

djarum99 July 21 2007, 18:48:02 UTC

Thank you ♥

tephroliah July 22 2007, 02:24:54 UTC

*wibble* <3

(Also, haha, you wrote a songfic. ;P )

pyracies July 23 2007, 03:32:57 UTC

I had to give you a happy ending. For now. ♥

sparrows_swann July 22 2007, 15:55:34 UTC

She thinks of him during thunderstorms; impetuous, and unexpected as his visits.
I don't know why but I just find this line so pretty!

I think someone said the same thing above: I generally don't like song fics because they tend to be not so well done, but you made it work! I'm going to download this song now.

I like that I can tell you put your heart into this. I've been feeling disappointed because that's been missing in some other fics that I've read lately, characters are just lacking emotion and such (eek, does that sound too harsh?). Bugger, as Jack would say. Great job, I can't wait for the next installment!

pyracies July 23 2007, 03:34:46 UTC

I like that I can tell you put your heart into this.

You can? Shit. These are supposed to be thinly veiled journal entries. I guess the veil is too thin, then, aye?

Thank you so much for the wonderful feedback, and for reading, &tc. PS: Don't tell anyone the bit about my heart, that may get me into a spot of trouble in the land of the real. ♥