Seymour; Don't Follow Me (Part 2)

Aug 11, 2008 01:15

Title: Don’t Follow Me (Part 2 of 3)
Setting: FFX
Theme + Number: 37) Fascination, 47) Slow and Steady, 57)Naked
Character: Seymour
Pairings/Other Characters: Seymour/Shelinda
Rating: R
Warnings: Sexual Content
Summary: Part 2 of ‘Don’t Follow Me’, Seymour and Shelinda meet at the inn near Macalania temple for the night and early morning.

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co_0kie August 11 2008, 09:21:22 UTC
Very good! Such an odd pairing, but I guess it makes sense in some ways... And you really made it believable. Also, I LOVE you for not having Shelinda really enjoy the loss of her virginity. If I read one more sex scene where a virgin suddenly turns out to be an orgasming sex goddess, I'll kill myself.

One little nitpick: Yuna has six guardians, not seven. There are seven team members, but one of them is Yuna herself.

Really cool, though. Can't wait to read the next part :)

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animecrush August 11 2008, 17:34:24 UTC
If I read one more sex scene where a virgin suddenly turns out to be an orgasming sex goddess, I'll kill myself.

Yeah, I see so many fics where that occurs as well and I'm like: "Uh.. it does not work that way." I wanted to be realistic about it, especially concerning these two.

Yuna has six guardians, not seven.

I swear I thought I had counted that right. I may have counted Yuna in the mix as well. Or maybe my mind was thinking of the one time Seymour fights with Yuna and Auron. But thank you for pointing that out! I wouldn't consider that nitpicky at all! I should know how many guardians there are >.>"

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