Comments | pyrebi: DCMB 2011: Scheherazade of the Super Eight (2/2)

pyrebi

DCMB 2011: Scheherazade of the Super Eight (2/2)

Dec 27, 2011 21:08

dean winchester is a douche, failface mclateson, the mini bang that ate ohio, genre? what genre?, i tried to make this funny but ymmv, fanfiction, oh fine castiel can have his own tag, damn you gina!, glorious phallic obsession, fluttery wings and horny things, meanwhile in a parallel world..., dean/castiel: two assholes in love, so much drama!, get to work pyrebi, ohgodohgodmybrain, whatever. idek., entrails and other gooey bits, that show with the brothers and the car

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ellethill December 29 2011, 14:15:47 UTC

My god, were the mood and tone of this fic amazing! It was wonderful to read, thanks for sharing.

pyrebi April 7 2012, 16:26:56 UTC

-blushes- Thank you so much. I was trying for a certain mood, but I kept second-guessing myself the whole time I was writing it. I'm thrilled that you thought it worked!

epicureal December 29 2011, 16:43:21 UTC

this is just absolutely wonderful. i especially loved the brick joke, and the description of the broken cas at the start :D

pyrebi April 7 2012, 16:27:46 UTC

Oh, the brick joke. Bane of my childhood. xD Thank you, and I'm glad you liked!

honeylocusttree December 29 2011, 19:04:26 UTC

I forgot how engaging a story (or a bunch of stories) within a story can really be. This was really interesting, moved forward very well with no dead space, and was, yes, very engaging. I especially liked all the true-visage-of-angels stuff in the last part--anything about that (that's more interesting than tentacles) is guaranteed to get my attention, and it was really well rendered here. Very palpable, very real.

I'd totally read this again. Thanks for a neat, interesting read in a totally different vein than anything else I've read! Fantastic stuff!

pyrebi April 7 2012, 16:43:34 UTC

Aw, but tentacles are fun! But no, I love angels. They're basically light and sound and fury badly crammed into some meat shells. That you end up with characters as different as Anna, Castiel, Michael, and Balthazar is just fascinating. (Also, the Jegudiel lookalike transformed into a vaguely fish-like appearance because traditionally one of Saint Raphael Archangel's attributes is a fish. So that was fun for me.)

I'm so glad that you enjoyed the fic, and thank you for taking to time to leave such a wonderful comment!

wickedvirtue December 30 2011, 07:14:53 UTC

I don't know how to express how much I *love* understated horror, but this had it in spades and I just want to roll around in it. This was almost too good, I tell you!

pyrebi April 7 2012, 16:45:26 UTC

Yessssss. I was trying to go for that, but I wasn't sure how well I'd succeeded. \o/

Thank you for reading~!

e313 December 30 2011, 13:51:16 UTC

i love the writing in this. and i love the ...otherworldiness...the 'other'. well done! i had a wonderful time reading it, your characterizations were marvelous, and the little stories that Dean says, Dean saying them, it was touching and weird and brilliant. thank u for sharing this.

pyrebi April 7 2012, 16:47:39 UTC

Ah, thank you so much! It's a bit different tone-wise from what I normally write, so I struggled with it. So glad you enjoyed the outcome!