Fic: Lights

[pyrefly_sky]

Title: Lights
Fandom: Final Fantasy X
Characters: Auron & teenage Tidus
Rating: Safe
Spoilers: Some... maybe
For: 60_minute_fics
Notes: Because I take myself far to seriously sometimes...

Comments

[muggy_mountain]

I really admire the detail in this. Auron coughing into his coffee, Tidus stirring his cereal...these establish and solidify your scene. I like that your Auron is able to deflect the question --by the time they return to Spira, it seems he has a pretty good handle on Tidus. I too am interested in the relationship between dream Zanarkand and Spira, so I selfishly hope you explore it more!

Sometimes I see pretty little lights too (they look a lot like your journal background, except they fly around), but luckily I as live in the 21st century, I haven't been banished to the asylum and know that they are due to my low blood pressure. Yay for medical science!

[pyrefly_sky]

Thank you!!

I see those lights too, normally when I get really dizzy or move too quickly. I have a lovely list of medical issues I could link it too so I have no idea what really causes it, is it wrong that I've never told a doctor about it?

I'm hoping to write more Zanarkand pieces, young Tidus and Auron make me laugh so hard, so I will certianly be diving back in there again next time an idea hits! ^_^

[nina_nicky]

hnnn, I don't even know the fandom but I like how you really let puberty hit without making it look too extreme. I also liked your discription of Auron's attitude and all that by simply letting us watch his movements and reactions instead of making him talk a lot. ^-^