This is beautiful! You've captured Seto's and Mokuba's personalities so well. It makes sense that Seto is unhappy and uneasy about Mokuba hanging out with Yugi-tachi, and that he's afraid that Mokuba will no longer need and want him.
LOL, I love the part where he's feeling satisfaction over breaking the china and thinking about Joey's reaction. XD Priceless, and very in character.
The ending is so sweet, with Mokuba coming to apologize. The last line is very powerful.
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LOL, I love the part where he's feeling satisfaction over breaking the china and thinking about Joey's reaction. XD Priceless, and very in character.
The ending is so sweet, with Mokuba coming to apologize. The last line is very powerful.
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