(Untitled)

Oct 23, 2005 21:03


"Stop"

Yet I crawl,

on my face now.

Surrender all,

Shudder to a halt.

Erase my thoughts

so I can hear.

Blind my eyes

to focus on you.

Mute my tongue

So you can speak.

Pause the spinning world

so distraction is gone.

Let me sing a redemption song.

Leave a comment

Comments 1

megs2911 October 24 2005, 23:25:58 UTC
Name Twin -
This is beautiful! It sums up so much in such a brilliant, beautiful conciseness... it means something to me, as I am sure it means something different to you, but I wanted you to know that it touched me.
Love ya,
-Your Name Twin

Reply


Leave a comment

Up