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[pyrosinferno]

I wish to live with you
on a planet at the edge of the universe.

Earthly houses have tired me.
Weed, pest, gnome, - I wish to uproot

myself from them as easy
as how I lock the knob on every ghost

in every room, as quick as when I turn off
each predictable kiss in this black and white

world of di Caprio and Winslet, titanic
towers

Comments

[curdyshoelaces]

i really like this...:o

[meetmy_tommygun]

Very beautiful, Migoy. Very beautiful. Another touching and heart-wrenching one from you! Keep it up!

[ilaughyou]

i particularly like these lines:

I wish to live with you
on a planet at the edge of the universe

where strange is now home,
where we plot

the geography of our feet
and the zodiac of our lives.

the imagery of the poem has turned me into a calvin in a romance with his pet tiger hobbes. how both see the universe as an intimate playground. i like the play of yours words.

[pyrosinferno]

Hey. Thanks so much for the comment. I'm actually frustrated right now as a writer... so thanks for the affirmation :)

[ilaughyou]

the affirmation that you are a frustrated writer?!? silly, i didn't mean that way.

did the italicized words come from another book? which may be?

*play of 'your', not 'yours'.

[pyrosinferno]

Oh. What I meant was thanks for affirming me in terms of my "good" writing. Hehe.

Nope. Those didnt come from any book :)