Fic: The Ring of Fire - Chapter 1

Mar 24, 2009 21:23


Title: The Ring of Fire - Chapter 1

Rating: PG

Pairing: Danny/Adam

Summary: The evolution of Danny and Adam’s relationship as it unfolds under the Big Top that is American Idol.

Disclaimer: This is a work of fiction. In the immortal words of The Temptations, “It was just my imagination.” (Can’t wait for Motown. I love Detroit!) No disrespect is ( Read more... )

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tinkertoo March 25 2009, 01:59:50 UTC
aww, i like it so far. and i just giggled so hard (while reading) at the image of Danny singing Womanizer. i'd probably pay to see that, just for the giggle factor lol. and also i love how the conservative boy wants to dance with the gay boy, it sounds like a love story in the making. and the end was so heart-breakingly cute. i wanted to jump through the computer and give them both a huge hug.
can't wait for more!

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storylandqueen March 25 2009, 02:04:34 UTC
Okay, we matched icons again. Karen seriously needs to make more so we quit doing this.

And I totally forgot about Danny singing Womanizer, I loved that part as well because, yes, quite giggle-worthy. Also:

i love how the conservative boy wants to dance with the gay boy, it sounds like a love story in the making

You just said it better than I could.

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q79vx6pr10 March 25 2009, 23:36:22 UTC
I'm glad you like it so far. There should be more giggling to come (hopefully) in the next chapter. Stay tuned.

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storylandqueen March 25 2009, 02:03:02 UTC
Oh my gosh, I had thought about doing a fic that starts off with Adam teaching Danny to dance and this is so much better than anything I thought of!

I have to admit, I think you did Danny quite well and I love Adam's thoughts throughout the fic, so well done. I certainly can't wait for the next part and I'd like to say I'm happy there's a writer with as much talent as you seem to have for this pairing.

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q79vx6pr10 March 25 2009, 23:38:07 UTC
That's very kind of you to say. I've never written RPS before so I find it to be kind of...not sure. Obviously, doesn't stop me though. Glad you like it so far.

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storylandqueen April 1 2009, 05:38:00 UTC
It can be kind of difficult trying to understand how someone works, but I think the more you write someone, you gain a better grasp of who they are and how they reaction. And even if you don't fully capture them, this is still fiction, so we're allowed a few mishaps. Now, I see you have chapter two up, so I'm off to read it. :)

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q79vx6pr10 March 25 2009, 23:39:50 UTC
Thanks for commenting! I appreciate it. It's very motivational, especially when I'm dead tired. Like right now. But I'm going to write while watching the boys.

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michelledru March 25 2009, 03:21:21 UTC
I love this so far!

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q79vx6pr10 March 25 2009, 23:40:21 UTC
Glad you like. I hope the trend continues.

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sentrille March 25 2009, 03:51:40 UTC
You don't know how happy I was when I saw the TBC at the veeeery bottom. I especially liked Adam in this, and I don't know why. :)

I'll be waiting for the next part!

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q79vx6pr10 March 25 2009, 23:45:25 UTC
Thanks for the comment. I'm glad I can make you happy with three letters. I'm working on the next part. Stay tuned!

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