I was SOO thrilled to see another chapter of this!! What a wonderful way to start 2012 :-) I've been wondering when you would update and I even went back a few times to make sure it was tagged. But it was worth every single second of waiting - I know how this level of masterful writing can take a lot of time, effort, research and thought, and I'm prepared to wait for every update. *hugs*
Your writing is seriously breathtaking. I can actually feel the love between Brian and Justin, as if I'm inside both of them. It is so very palpable, and your imagery and description and attention to every last detail is truly masterful. It's like reading a painting of their love, with every sentence a brushstroke of colour that is so uniquely them. That's what really stood out for me in this chapter
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Wow, sapphire, thanks so much for the amazing feedback.
It is so very palpable, and your imagery and description and attention to every last detail is truly masterful. It's like reading a painting of their love, with every sentence a brushstroke of colour that is so uniquely them.
This, coming from someone who creates some of the most beautiful imagery and description I've read, anywhere, means so much to me. Their love really is a living thing, and it grows stronger (heh) all the time. Brian has come so far in his willingness to open up and trust in his future Justin - but this, especially coming just when he finally shows a little faith in the world, will be an especially hard blow for him. Our boys are strong though - both of them!
The best part of finally posting this part is that I can treat myself to the last couple chapters of Crosses as a reward! I find it very difficult to read while writing, but I've been dying knowing I was missing out on your amazing story.
I did go back and re-read part I and the whole thing together just blew me away... especially the two very different perspectives of that rainy stormy night. Please don't keep us waiting too long for part III.
That night is most definitely a seminal moment in our boy's lives. Their connection is an amazing and powerful thing. Thank you for reading, and for the feedback. I appreciate both, very much.
Oh!! My first thought was, 'Huh? It says 'WIP' beside the 'Complete' tag.', but now I realize that my note might easily be misconstrued as this being the final part. I'm sorry!! I will fix that. I anticipate at least four parts in total. I will try not to be so long with the next one, I promise.
I am glad you're hooked though! I will try my best not to disappoint!
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Your writing is seriously breathtaking. I can actually feel the love between Brian and Justin, as if I'm inside both of them. It is so very palpable, and your imagery and description and attention to every last detail is truly masterful. It's like reading a painting of their love, with every sentence a brushstroke of colour that is so uniquely them. That's what really stood out for me in this chapter ( ... )
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It is so very palpable, and your imagery and description and attention to every last detail is truly masterful. It's like reading a painting of their love, with every sentence a brushstroke of colour that is so uniquely them.
This, coming from someone who creates some of the most beautiful imagery and description I've read, anywhere, means so much to me. Their love really is a living thing, and it grows stronger (heh) all the time. Brian has come so far in his willingness to open up and trust in his future Justin - but this, especially coming just when he finally shows a little faith in the world, will be an especially hard blow for him. Our boys are strong though - both of them!
The best part of finally posting this part is that I can treat myself to the last couple chapters of Crosses as a reward! I find it very difficult to read while writing, but I've been dying knowing I was missing out on your amazing story.
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Your sex scenes were fantastic, like everything else you write. You have nothing to worry about.
And no one writes the angst like you do.
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Michelle
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Thanks so much for sticking with us!
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I did go back and re-read part I and the whole thing together just blew me away... especially the two very different perspectives of that rainy stormy night. Please don't keep us waiting too long for part III.
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I am glad you're hooked though! I will try my best not to disappoint!
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