STOP! If you're reading this from a flist or a direct link, be aware this is the continuation of Part 3 from this post. If you haven't read that yet, go back!
I re-read the first two parts. I'm so glad you are continuing to write this story. It can't be easy subject matter to write, but I am absolutely riveted!
Thank you. Part of the reason that it's been so long between chapters is the sheer heartbreak of the research for it. But there is also a lot of hope and courage in the stories, too. I hope to honor that!
Had to re-read this story again to know what it was about. What happen to the baby? why was brain in NY at the time Justin saw him in the cab? and can we replace this Justin for the Justin I just read in this story were as I was actually feeling bad for brain because that Justin was giving brain word for word not putting up with his shit. looking forward to the next chapter
The prologue takes place in the future (the day the baby is born), but the rest of the story is prior to that. It does move back and forth over the course of two weeks, between Pittsburgh and New York. The location/time is at the beginning of each section. By the end of Part 4 the two time frames will have caught up with each other.
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I'm so glad you're still writing this and I can't wait for the next part!
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Hope that helps, and thanks for reading!
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