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Entry #14 - "The Gravitational Effects of Rotation"

Apr 18, 2006 16:53

Title: The Gravitational Effects of Rotation
Written By: msjudi
Timeline:Post Season Five
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: None
Genre:

( The Gravitational Effects of Rotation )

Comments 82

jillapet April 19 2006, 21:48:53 UTC

Oh wow. Very powerful.

msjudi May 1 2006, 17:22:08 UTC

Thank you :)

shadownyc April 19 2006, 23:07:11 UTC

This is so incredibly creative and fresh. I enjoyed each step in B/J's lives together and seeing how it unfolded through a timeline of sex. This is the crux of their first intense connection and has always been a central focus of their lives. To make the final crucial step that of making love raw, it's like they are ready hit the pinnacle of their relationship and final sail on that comfortable level together.

msjudi May 1 2006, 17:23:39 UTC

Thank you so much, I'm glad you enjoyed it! :)

damietta April 19 2006, 23:22:15 UTC

First of all, I loved the title.

Secondly, you displayed their passion and love perfectly especially in the dialog of not saying the I-love-yous, but showing it nonetheless.

Brian's leaving and Justin following and their decision that last break-up was too close for comfort was also well-done. Their love is very deep, but in typical Brian and Justin style.

Good job!

Deb

msjudi May 1 2006, 17:26:29 UTC

Thanks for the comment about the title, I thought a long time about what I might like to call it! The promt was about the world holding love, and Brian and Justin have always travelled in an orbit around each other that has them in its gravatational grip, so it seemed appropriate. :D

Thanks, Deb! :D

queenydiva April 20 2006, 01:46:14 UTC

Wow! I really liked this, especially the last argument and resolution. ;o)

msjudi May 1 2006, 17:26:43 UTC

Thank you :)

happier_bunny April 20 2006, 02:10:03 UTC

Brilliantly beautiful and very powerful.

Justin sighs and nods, hearing the true pain behind the accusation- 'You want someone younger and prettier than me,'. His face softens and Brian almost gives in.

"I had started to think you didn't want me anymore." Justin's confession hurts them both with it's honesty.

"Right back atcha," Brian says tightly

Honesty between Brian and Justin I love it...them traveling all over and leaving traces of their love is adorable and such a very comfortable thought to me!

msjudi May 1 2006, 17:28:07 UTC

Thank you! :D I really enjoyed writing this one; the thought of B/J through the years comforts me, too.