Entry #14 - "The Gravitational Effects of Rotation"

[severina2001]

Title: The Gravitational Effects of Rotation
Written By: msjudi
Timeline:Post Season Five
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: None
Genre:

Comments

[seanmegansean]

I would squee, but somehow this is too serious to squee.

I. Love. It.

I totally agree with previous comments. New, fresh, powerful, different. WOW.

"Calm… the fuck… down…" he gasps, and he isn't totally sure if he's speaking to Justin or to himself. He forces himself to slow his breathing, ensuring a steady flow of oxygen into and out of his lungs, and mourns the loss of a perfectly good woody. He wonders if suing the state of Colorado for it's dangerously high altitudes and the subsequent loss of erections it can produce would be a waste of his time, decides he might be overreacting a tad, and then curses again when he notices Justin's equally deflated ardor.
This made me laugh, it sounded so much like Brian... and Justin's reaction. I could so picture them. That whole Denver part was perfect.

Outstanding B/J voices, very, very well written.

OMG, what a wonderful fic. Whoever wrote it THANK YOU!!!

[msjudi]

Wow, thank you so much, I love it when I can move people with my words. :D I had such a good time writing this story!

[irya_angelus]

gah..i don't even know what to say to this. wonderfully written, beautifully original. brian and justin through the years...an absolutely amazing fic.

[msjudi]

Thank you so much :)

[seamonkeyz27]

This was fantastic. I love the timeline... I love jealous Brian... and I love that they waited a loooooooong time to do it raw.

[msjudi]

hehehe thank you so much :)

[court1429]

It is one of my fondest wishes to see stories about the two of them 25 and more years down the road, so thank you for this one! I have no idea who wrote it. *ponders*

[msjudi]

Thank you :D

[sita_moonlight]

I loved this story.

[msjudi]

Thanks hon :)