I enjoyed this one. The long tracking shot of Justin's career is fun to watch, along with the details of the gold-painted performance artist and his stealing free wireless by balancing on the tub. Very very nice.
I've read all the fic now, and I can say that this honestly holds up against the best of the rest. As I wrote elsewhere, this is a highly polished diamond that glitters. Congratulations.
*sniffs* Oh man, you got me all choked up. You have no idea how much your comments mean to me, and the fact that you came back just makes me even more giddy and girly. "A highly polished diamond that glitters"? Wow. Thank you so, SO much.
It's no lie. I voted for this story because it stuck with me, it used the prompt in a clever way, and I loved its obvious New York-ness. Thanks for writing it in the first place.
I got about halfway through writing my own story before I realized that, ha ha. The funny thing is, it was never supposed to end that way when I made my original outline, and somehow that's where I ended up! Thanks so much for commenting!
I loved Brian's nostaligic "It's so college" line, and Justin being an idiot and messing up easy mac was very cute. And the text messages from Brian. All the littel details in this fic were really good and interesting. Great work!
Oh, thank you so much! I really am a details girl--I get very ADD and schizo when I write, and suddenly everything becomes relevent. I'm glad that it worked for you, too!
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