HUMAN BEHAVIOR

Jun 13, 2010 19:32

Title: Human Behavior
Written By: elinas83
Timeline: following s3e08
Author's Notes: Brian POV

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bksbracelet June 13 2010, 13:12:31 UTC
OMG that was heartbreaking and glorious. Brian's pain and jealousy demonstrate how hard it is for him to trust and when he did he lost for a while. Beautifully written thank you

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elinas83 July 17 2010, 23:41:02 UTC
Thanks for your review. I really appreciate it :)

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pam81 June 13 2010, 13:19:39 UTC
This was really intense. So beautiful and breathtaking.
I've loved to read about Brian's thoughts. It will not be easy for him to trust Justin again. He has been hurt... he was in pain, and it's hard for him to accept the fact that Justin left... You made really a wonderful job. Love it ♥

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elinas83 July 17 2010, 23:44:36 UTC
Thank you for your kind words. I'm glad I succeeded in convey emotions with this story. I wasn't sure about that. Thanks again :)

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bibi22k June 14 2010, 13:37:57 UTC
You did an absolutely amazing job portraying Brian's powerful and conflicting emotions. I ache for him and Justin. Brilliant piece of writing! Thank you for sharing your work!

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elinas83 July 17 2010, 23:47:36 UTC
Thank you for your kind words. I'm glad you liked the story. I was pretty nervous about it, afraid that the emotions weren't there. So thanks for your review :)

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Human Behavior fansee June 17 2010, 00:35:38 UTC
Interesting take on Brian post-Ian. I love all the conflict inherent in that story arc. FanSee

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Re: Human Behavior elinas83 July 17 2010, 23:45:35 UTC
Thank you for your review. I really appreciate it :)

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tv_fan_2008 June 19 2010, 06:20:26 UTC
This was really good. A very interesting look into what Brian was thinking during this time.

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elinas83 July 17 2010, 23:48:29 UTC
Thanks for your kind words. I really appreciate it :)

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