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qafan

Shades of Grey Chapter 8 Part Two

Mar 01, 2009 00:55

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turtletwins March 1 2009, 07:22:15 UTC

I was happy to see an update to this fic.
You captured Brian's jealous feelings towards David perfectly...even if he'd never say them outloud. Great update. <3

qafan March 1 2009, 19:10:14 UTC

Thank you! I don't like David at all, and I'll be glad when I don't have to write him anymore! lol

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qafan March 2 2009, 06:50:18 UTC

Thanks! Working on it! lol

sjmpets March 2 2009, 06:41:19 UTC

wants him so badly he sends him packing when he can't control him the way he wants to. brian was right about him all along.

liked this update. questions his relationships. don't like how he manipulates michael most of the time but i think that's one of the reasons they're friends. brian needs to use him for the love he gets from him and michael needs to be used to get the love he wants from brian.

qafan March 2 2009, 06:57:38 UTC

I think at this point in his life, Manipulation is the only way Brian knows how to deal with his relationships at this point.

Of COURSE, Justin changes that, but as of now, he really doesn't know how to be a friend without using those he cares most about.

randysgirl_645 March 4 2009, 03:47:52 UTC

that was really good :D

qafan March 4 2009, 04:21:42 UTC

Thanks! I'm glad you liked it.