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cowboystracker in qafchristmas

Mr. and Mr. Santa Claus - Part 4

Dec 27, 2008 23:43

Sorry to be taking so long writing this fic, but things just keep getting in the way. I hope to finish it before the end of the year. Already working on part 5. Here's the next part.

Title: Mr. and Mr. Santa Claus (aka The Santa Clause QaF Style)
Author: Deb Tanner
Timeframe: Post Season Five
Rating: PG to R (mostly language)
Summary: It's ( Read more... )

gus, fiction, b/j, cowboystracker

Comments 9

spike7451 December 28 2008, 14:39:05 UTC

Lovely to see an update, great chapter. Loved Ted's reaction. LOL!

cowboystracker December 28 2008, 16:01:56 UTC

Thanks! Glad you liked the chapter. It actually was going to be much shorter, but just kept growing!

LOL! Ted's reaction is actually why this chapter became longer than intended. Ted & Emmett are my favorite (after B/J of course) characters from the series and every time I thought of them telling Ted and then proving it with Bernard appearing, I kept seeing Ted's eyes roll back just before he dropped to the floor. So I decided to go with. Very happy that you liked it!

Thanks for continuing to read and for commenting.

sjmpets December 28 2008, 16:55:28 UTC

"For fucks sake," Brian growled as he moved to Ted's side. "I don't believe it!" that is brian to a tee. ted's reaction was priceless.
thanks for the update. can't wait for more.

cowboystracker December 28 2008, 19:30:13 UTC

So happy to hear you liked it. It's a bit difficult to keep Brian in character, but just because he has grown more and shows his emotions a bit more than he would in previous years, he will still react to some things the same way he always did. So I'm really happy to hear I got it right!

Glad you also liked Ted's reaction. His reactions to things/events in the series always amazed me because he was so visual in his expressions.

Thanks for reading and commenting.

brianswalk December 29 2008, 23:17:00 UTC

Lol, poor Theodore! Loved the story of Jennifer's doll and that Bernard remembered her--how cool for Jenn!

cowboystracker December 30 2008, 02:53:02 UTC

Gotta love Ted! I'll admit I was a bit worried Jennifer's story would sound a bit corny so I'm glad you liked it. I decided that since Bernard has been around for a long, long time that he would remember special gifts that were made for children who still believed even after they grew up. ;)

Thanks for reading and commenting.

brianswalk December 30 2008, 02:58:01 UTC

Oh, Jennifer's story is totally corny, but that's what makes Christmas stories so much fun! The rules are so much more bendy in holiday fics, lol!
I may be slow getting to you, but I look forward to your updates, hon.

lemonbargirl December 30 2008, 12:08:11 UTC

OMG, I chuckled at Ted's reaction to the whole story. ;D
And I like the solution Cynthia came up with. Good girl. ;)
*off to read the next chapter*

cowboystracker December 30 2008, 13:53:06 UTC

LOL! Thanks! Glad you got a laugh! Ted's reactions can be so much fun to play with. And Cynthia always seemed so sensible in the series so i figured she'd be the one to come up with a solution that would work... for now at least.

Thanks for reading and reviewing! Hope you enjoy the next part!