Mr. and Mr. Santa Claus - Part 7 - NC17

[cowboystracker]

Please note that the rating has changed to NC17. I couldn't help it... the boys were getting rowdy and wouldn't let me continue with the story until I let them have sex... go figure.

Title: Mr. and Mr. Santa Claus (aka The Santa Clause QaF Style)
Author: Deb Tanner
Timeframe: Post Season Five
Rating: NC17
Summary: It's Christmas Eve and Gus is

Comments

[brianswalk]

Ah, Debbie figured it out! I loved so much about this chapter, hon!

Brian had been honest as well when he had told Justin if he couldn't see his dick, then no one else would either.
*snort*
The thought of Brian getting fat and white-haired kinda repulses me, to be honest. But the way you're writing Justin and his acceptance makes it all OK in a weird sort of way.

Ted, on the other hand, gave a short burst of hysterical laughter and dropped like a rock.

"Told you, Sunshine,"
*dies*
(lol, I'm still laughing)

but drew the line at the suggestion of changing the color of Justin's eyes, even for one night.
Awww, I would too.

I liked that Michael looked around Santa to find Brian. And you can't blame him. Santa is the last costume I would ever pick for Brian.

Yo go girl! I love it when someone sticks up for Brian, although it's rare that it's Debbie doing the um... sticking up!
Thoroughly enjoyed this babe! Well done!

One little thing towards the end.
"See you son, Debbie," Justin added.
You may have meant "see you soon..."

[cowboystracker]

I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter. I have to agree that Brian getting fat and having white hair is kinda repulsive and it's very difficult to write but I wanted to confront Brian's fear of growing older and losing his appearance. I wanted him to know that wasn't all there was to him, that Justin saw more than what everyone saw.

Yeah, poor Mikey! Couldn't believe Brian as Santa! Maybe I should have had him pull a 'Ted' and faint in Babylon! ;)

Hopefully Ted will get use to all this and stop fainting! Brian of course knew he would faint and Justin was certain that he was over the shock by now. But hey, when the Stud of Liberty Avenue waltzes into the room looking like Santa Claus, what's an accountant to do?

With them moving away, Debbie was starting to look at Brian differently and seeing him for the things he had done instead of the mask he always hid behind.

Thank you so much for catching that typo. There was another one right below it that I also missed. ;)

[darla_isabelle]

Hi, I really enjoyed this story! Are you planning on finishing it?

[cowboystracker]

Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it so far. I am planning on finishing it, just having difficulties with my muse and internet problems. It will be finished though! Thanks again for reading and commenting!