[YunJae] The Joys and Woes of Inspiration Part 2 [For Imie]
Title: The Joys and Woes of Inspiration
A/N: Written from a prompt given by imie_schweetzel. This is the end.
Let's get straight to it~
( It's the smut. Kind of. )
A/N: Written from a prompt given by imie_schweetzel. This is the end.
Let's get straight to it~
( It's the smut. Kind of. )
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sorry I really don't have to give a proper comment >________<;;;
but this piece really leaved me breathless~~
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I'm glad you liked the story. Thanks.
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And of course,the OT5 friendship pwns. Even though the Yunjae are in love, their dongsaeng is never far from their thoughts. TBH, I could really picture Junsu being cheakily manipulative, the Yoomin ganging up on Junsu while he's crying for help to Jaejoong in their RL...
PS: The song that you have in mind in which Jaejoong is in the midst of composing, is it Wasurenaide??
I've enjoyed this very much...
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It really took me so long to finish reading it...but I felt the most gratifying among all.
The story is so beautifully written....in not only showing their friendships among them but also the romance between our favourite Yunjae pair. This is loved!
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Thank you for commenting, I'm glad to hear that you liked it. And for pointing out the friendship stuff. ^_~
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And yes, OT5 friendship pwns everything. Glad you liked the dynamics I gave them in the story, it was incredibly easy to imagine of the things happening.
I was thinking about Wasurenaide, but to be honest, I think Jae can still do better. I think it's an awesome song, don't get me wrong, but he can definitely improve more? And he did say that he did a lot of translating rather than writing it in japanese, whichis what I was kind of going for here... but it could've been Wasurenaide, who knows.
I'm pleased that you enjoyed it, thanks for commenting. ♥
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Changmin and Junsu really act like kids sometimes, and what better time than when Jae can be the mom? I kept trying to kick Yoochun back into the story, so I'm glad that you were still able to tell he was very much a part of the story; sometimes he does blend into the background, which is sort of odd, lol. And yes, Yunho is a really sweet guy and I really hope that their relationship will continue to flourish.
Thank you for reading and commenting! There's no better feeling than the DBSK love. XD
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i liked the storyline.... ^_______________^
Uknow...
as sweet as ever.... =D
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I always see Yunho as someone who would treat his lover very well, so... hmm, yeah.
Thank for you for commenting~
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Here's one if you still want it? I was totally dying by the time I finished posting, lol, just wanted to get to bed as quickly as possible.
And Karin, here's a spot for you if want to comment here instead. XD
I wonder if you girls will see this? O.o
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i just love love LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVVVVVVVVVVVVEEEEEEEEEEE what u did with the prompts! this is, omg this omg omg omg so much more than what i've expected. u r so good, and i was in love with your yunho because he's such a thoughtful lover and a selfless giver (not that he isn't in RL, but who knows. ehe. ^^;;) i love the way yunjae loves, sensual yet endearing, at times i felt like i was verbally-assaulted by your pretty words till im nearly crying >__<
and of course yoosumin. the ever-so-important dongsaengs. :D silly n cheeky, but loved all the same. :)
i feel like falling in love and watching the moonlight. im adding this to my mem coz it's so good. thank you bb for writing n posting this, even when u were so tired. *huggles* although i know this is not directly dedicated to me, i'd be a shameless brat and claim this as MINE! hehe xD
yunjae ♥ yongwonhi. thank you so much for this precious fic! :)
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yeay for u to be in love with my comment! xD i'm so happy that my prompt made u write this awesome oneshot - but really, it's all u. *hugs*
with yunjae, there is always something physical there, but what ties them for real is the deep connection they have with each other. sometimes, i really do think they can read each other's minds. n yunho cant keep his hands to himself -- they always wander and hover around jaejoong -- but hey isn't that what's being in love made u do? 8D
haha u just gave me a permission to be a real brat xD and im everywhere indeed, coz ive been reading n not really writing these days. lol. :3 now that u've gotten me hooked with your writing, i'll be expecting more goodies from u of coz ^^v
ah u r really spoiling me by telling me that i can request anything! i'm really greedy when it comes to asking pple to write fics -- especially those whose writings i enjoy! >.<"
♥♥♥ i love u already. haha. :p
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