V-Day with Kotarou

[quaint_twilight]

I guess I'm posting this a bit late but I wrote this on Valentine's Day after wondering about what this special day would be like with Kotarou and Takaya.

Title: V-Day with Kotarou
Fandom: Mirage of Blaze
Pairing: Kotarou x Takaya
Rating/Warning: PG-13; not beta-ed, written in 20 minutes
Word count: 294
Disclaimer: I don't own Mirage of Blaze.

Comments

[fantasygirl49]

such a short fic, but i like it...it's a bit sad that takaya will only see naoe and doesn't realize kotarou also care for him.

[quaint_twilight]

At the very least, Takaya will come to appreciate Kotarou later on.

[fantasygirl49]

iam glad to hear that, cause right now takaya can't distinguish what is truly real since he is denying the truth that is in front of him ^^

[mmartini]

Thanks for sharing! It was good, yet sad, and the feeling that i have to hugging them is rising in me.... Kagetora's loneliness is hurt so much.

[skinintheway]

This fic, from an overall view gives kind of awkward and a bit sad feeling. But because it is mirage, this can actually be called fun…or at least I have long since gotten used to redefining terms like angst, love, pain, fun, and so on. Kuwabara-sensei is to blame.
I do love Kotarou. Yet the true is I don’t understand his character much, you know, being emotionaly inhibited and stuff…
A man like this, what drives HIM through all those years? I can’t possibly imagine.
I think he can fairly well join Naotaka’s club of abused, twisted and spent charas without any worry of being inferior to them XDDD
Back to the fic: You do realize that sensei is corrupting your way of thinking, right? What with all the „…“ and „ …! “ ??? XDDDD But you got right there.
What would be the difference if Takaya really said the last „Naoe“?

[quaint_twilight]

I guess what drives Kotarou is his sense of duty and loyalty to Ujiyasu (historically, the Fuuma ninjas served the Hojo clan for a considerable period of time), his only purpose being to carry out his orders without questioning them- perfect obedience. There isn't much background info on him, but my guess is that Kotarou isn't void of feelings, they were very well suppressed as a result of his training until Kagetora came along. Then his feelings began to influence his judgment, thereby confusing the poor ninja...

What would be the difference if Takaya really said the last „Naoe“?
Kotarou would weep... :P

[quaint_twilight]

No, I don't mind at all, and thanks for the rec! :)