The Book

Jan 31, 2005 11:50

This is the beginning of the second Chapter of the book. Just to water your mouths. The main character is Nika modeled after my sister Danielle lj SJ936 Let me know what you all think ( Read more... )

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risingtofall January 31 2005, 18:59:46 UTC
oh I love it!

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Dubious! sj936 January 31 2005, 19:14:17 UTC
Absolutely Delightful!
I can't wait to see more..
It seems like you are writing the book that could easily be a screen play, interesting choice. :-)

I read it once, and I am off to class, but I will read it again when I get home. I like your style, and some of your unconventional conventions.
:MUAH:
Much love
~Danielle

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rachael she say: anonymous February 2 2005, 14:21:03 UTC
very nice, good writing style, think more of proof reading. couple of typos, not alot. all and all id say good, keep it coming.

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