On a Different Note - Part 1 Nonfiction

Jan 27, 2012 13:11

I must be in editing mode (and suffering from insomnia). Poor writing is popping up everywhere these days.

Nonfiction and the wth sentence that's just tacked on:

"Early detection helps many athletes with diabetes enjoy rigorous training."

If you really think about that sentence, it's missing some key information/correlation to make it a true statement ( Read more... )

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interesting... karen_cat_7 November 17 2013, 20:41:31 UTC
i had no clue that i was insulin resistance and diabetes type 2 and PCOS because all of my doctors just kept looking at me and i swear, the three doctors that i had at that time (i think it was about three years ago - horrible memory issues still) would come in the examining room, take one look at me and just say "you're fat", "you've let yourself go", "you need to go on a diet. or my favorite "you need to exercise." i told that doctor that i had been trying (we have a treadmill and i had tried walking with my daughter - but the pain after those short excursions put me in bed for days and practically unable to function. that doctor nodded and said "yes, it's a hard situation that you're in". i thought i would kill him ( ... )

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