Officially Missing You [Jongkey] [1/1]

Jun 20, 2010 20:36


Title: Officially Missing You
Pairing: Jongkey
Genre: Romance, Fluff, a little bit of Angst
Rating: PG (Language)
Word count: 3,149
Disclaimer(s): I own nothing.
Summary: Kim Kibum always knows what he's doing, but when he starts to question himself his life quickly begins to crumble and he has to learn there's only one person who can help him put ( Read more... )

shinee fanfiction, jongkey

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sengseng June 21 2010, 03:20:33 UTC
wow, am i first?
i love this fic sweetie
it's well written, makes you smile, feel warmer after you finish
i can see a hint of reality in here, somehow..about their relationship, about the love of Kibum's grandmom for him. She knows it all, doesn't she? Kibum is lucky when he has a understanding grandmom like that
oh and i love how you describe JJong's voice, that was soooo sweet
p.s: Need you now is one of my favorite too ^^

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queen_anything June 21 2010, 04:00:43 UTC
You're quick! :D
& thank you so much! ;u;
I really loved writing the interaction between Kibum and his grandmother so I'm glad you liked it & felt it was realistic. :)
I'm really glad you liked it & Need You Now! You've seriously made me so happy with this comment!

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luuunaa June 21 2010, 03:22:18 UTC
GAH FFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFF.
now i'm sitting here in a gooey mess of myself. that was the cutest thing, homfg ;~;

"I missed you too," Kibum abruptly cut off his boyfriend and than spoke the only words he would be able to live with the rest of his life," Baby, I'm sorry, I was so wrong before."

dead <3

there is no way i can express how much ily for writing this in this little comment box.♥

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queen_anything June 21 2010, 04:04:22 UTC
Thank you so much! ;o;
I really thought that no one was going to like this because it's just so sappy and gooey! ^^;; It's good to know you do! <3

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luuunaa June 21 2010, 18:08:13 UTC
you're welcome bby [x NO. it's freaking amazing, you turned ME into a pile of happy and sappy, gooey nothing xD

um, and i'm not a stalker, but i was looking through your other journal entries and i saw that you're going to the wonder girls concert, too?! O: which one are you going to? :D -is going to see them in boston-

when i found out 2PM wasn't gonna be there i was like, jfghdfkjhgjglbdahsjghd .-. hopefully 2AM will be there, but on a list of their guest performances they didn't list either 2AM or PM so i was like, fffffff >__>

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queen_anything June 21 2010, 18:33:12 UTC
Aw, thank you dear! Now I feel like a happy & sappy, gooey mess! :3

No, I understand! Haha, I don't friend lock my stuff so it's perfectly open to everyone! xD I'm actually going to the one in Colorado, but I would've been going to the Boston one if I still lived on the East Coast! How I miss it back there. ;-;

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queen_anything June 21 2010, 16:19:56 UTC
I think I wrote this just because of the song! xD
& thank you so, so much! <3

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sengseng June 21 2010, 10:38:44 UTC
nah,it's not that "so sappy and gooey" at all
i mean, sometime we need to read some soft, sweet, romance fic like this, you know? since there are already a bunch of broken, angst, death or whatever out there. They're all great, too..not that i mind but we need something to help us relaxed a little bit, to enjoy, not to cause more negative thoughts for our already complicated life
i mean, confident with your writing skill though

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queen_anything June 21 2010, 16:21:35 UTC
Personally, I like reading this kind of sappy gooey stuff because I have all the negativity I need irl, so why they hell would I want to read about someone else's bad life? xD
Thnak you tons, bb! <3

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ponyatf June 21 2010, 12:03:53 UTC
That was a beautiful story, thanks a lot for it! One of my best friends had to choose between his boyfriend and his family too and it was an ugly buisness. I like, how it wasn't too much of a question to Key, because he knew, he had his grandmothers back. And the interactions between the members were sweetly and believable.
(But, by the way, you won't call your grandmother "ahjumma", it is more used for women, you don't really know. The wrd for grandmother is "halmeoni".)

Thanks again, I'll put this fic in my memories ~♥♥♥

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queen_anything June 21 2010, 16:24:15 UTC
Thank you, dear! <3 & I feel like I rushed Key's desicion way too much, because I also have friends who have had to make this choice and it's not an easy one, but for the sake of a one shot ... ^^;;
& thank you for pointing that out! I was so sure that wasn't the right word, but I asked my dad because he lived in Korea before and he was like yeah, that sounds like grandma. >.> Last time I listen to him.

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ponyatf June 21 2010, 23:09:36 UTC
I don't think, his decision was rushed (~ maybe, because I am also a quick decision maker), in most of the situations you know your answer from the beginning, it's just in question, how to handle the aftermath...

~ ㅋㅋㅋ How sweet from your dad, that he tried to help you figure out the right word! Please don't stop listen to him~ ;)

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