He Was The New Boy In Town [jongkey, minkey, jongminkey] [1/1]

[queen_anything]

Title: He Was The New Boy In Town
Pairing: Jongkey, Minkey, JongMinKey
Genre: Romance, Humor
Rating: PG-15 (Language, Sexual Situations, Drug Use)
Word count: 3,179
Disclaimer(s): I own nothing.
Summary: It was always just the two of them until the freaking new kid had to come in and ruin it all for Jonghyun.
A/N: Written for a little contest between me

Comments

[xkuroxhimex]

NOOOOOOO! JongKey are exclusively for each other and this just goes to show that Minho really is a whore If Minho weren't a whore I'd keep him for myself. -sigh- He's still my whore. and that Key is a slut.

Whatever, I kind of enjoyed reading this despite the mixed feelings.

[queen_anything]

I know, I know! /bows Please forgive me!

Even if you just kind of enjoyed it, I'm still really glad you commented. Thank you!

[xkuroxhimex]

Sorry if I came off as mean. I was hoping that in the end it would JUST be JongKey so I kept reading. lol I needed a fic so this is the first thing I saw when I woke up this morning before I went to work. lol Thanx for writing it though. haha

[queen_anything]

No, no, I understand! By all means you don't have to be in love with this! I really appreaciate any feedback, positive or not. :3

[ladymiria]

Wow that made laugh XD
jonghyun here is plain hilarious haha
loved it~
and I give you +1 cause it was more relevant to the gif hehe
<3

[queen_anything]

Aw, thank you so much! <3 & hehe isn't Jonghyun just so much fun?

[ahmins3]

[ahmins3]

[queen_anything]

Thank you so much for the feedback! I seriously appreaciate the long comment.

Gah, I'll be the first one to admit that this is definitely horrible characterization, plot, etc., but I can't help but be in love with it. Maybe it's because I'm surrounded by a bunch of rich kids who are exactly like how I wrote Jonghyun and Key & to me it feels like poking fun at them? & I love your comparison to how 90's it seems, maybe I've spent too much time looking at Onew's comeback photo?

I apologize deeply for not putting my best into this fic. I promise to do better in the future.

& Don't feel pressured, the other author is my sister, so this is just a fun little competition we were doing. Your honest opinion is all that matters! (Honestly, though, I'm such a spoilt brat - I'm making her buy me food anyway since she's older. ^^;;)

Again, I can't thank you enough for this comment. I'll make sure to keep this in mind when I'm writing in the future.

<3

[ahmins3]

[queen_anything]

Tysm ~

[tsunagatte]

+1

[queen_anything]

<3