I love how it wasn't just magically perfect, especially in the second one. The fourth one was great, walking that line between friendship and relationship and wanting to preserve the friendship too. Very nicely done.
Teeny thing, assume this should be thighs "stroking his tights relentlessly"
I like pretty first times fics, but they're soooo unrealistic...it's never perfect nor that good, it's more about being together in a new way than feeling good, at least in my opinion. Thanks for the review ^.^
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And thanks for the review =3
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Teeny thing, assume this should be thighs
"stroking his tights relentlessly"
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I like pretty first times fics, but they're soooo unrealistic...it's never perfect nor that good, it's more about being together in a new way than feeling good, at least in my opinion.
Thanks for the review ^.^
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