Shiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiit T_T

[queen_marshed]

I don't intend to make this my emo journal, so hopefully this isn't going to be a habit.

I failed my anatomy practical exam. I knew I was going badly in this unit, but you know seeing that you've fucking FAILED is depressing. Blerg. Now I'm pretty sure I've screwed up my physiology exam as well. Godamnit Mel, why can't you do better? I'm so

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[corey_mill]

Man, that really sucks about your class, sorry. :C

[queen_marshed]

Hey thanks for the honest crit! :D

Perhaps I should lengthen the pic a bit? I'll get the whole guy in then. About the empty space, maybe I should work on the background a bit, sor place something in the guys's hand or something . On the other hand I could attempt to change the angles of the bad guy's wings so they draw more attention to the stabbing bit. :S

[corey_mill]

No problem. C:

Like, I said I am not sure ... I wouldn't think you would want to lengthen the image, but I would be wrong. I tried to redraw the wings earlier in PS quick like to make them point more towards the stabbing ... but it ended up sucking. Although, the fact that I can't draw wings at all didn't help either.

- I would just suggest sketching out the different ideas that you have on top of this and see if you stumble onto something that looks really good. The composition isn't terrible as it is here or anything. So if you can't find something that looks better then I would just keep it similar to this.

[corey_mill]

I should really plan these thisngs more thouroughly. I generally just draw what's in my head and jsut kinda stick to that. I'm such a lazy ass. XD

Mmmm... maybe if I shift the camera angle a bit higher so rather than looking at them straight onwards we're more like above them...

[aizawa_mika]

*hugs* man, i hate to fail D: lets terrorize the school and make the teachers give us HD 8D *hugs*

i can't draw to save my life, so anyone who can draw proper art rocks to me 8D sorry no help. D:

[queen_marshed]

LOL YES. WE WILL HOLD THEN HOSTAGE WITH SPORKS! XD

Thanks anyway dear~ :3

[aizawa_mika]

XD yayssssss sporks 8D

welcome X3 *hugs*