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[queenbiff]

Ok, so I'm stuck. I need to improve my headline and finish this article off. You're all good at creating things, suggestions for making it better?

Bluefelt defeated once again

Another victory for Jayne Blonde as she defeats the evil villain known as Bluefelt Penn. His plan to implant microchips into gerbils with the intent on turning them into

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[kingandy]

Bluefelt felt blue, Blonde foiled

[queenbiff]

I love it!