FIC: "Tomorrow Takes Me Higher" (Part 4/4)

Nov 28, 2009 03:09

Title: Tomorrow Takes Me Higher

Pairing: Adam/Kris

Rating: R

Tomorrow Takes Me Higher, Part 4 )

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lilacmajestyvpm November 28 2009, 11:20:26 UTC
That was really good. Were you hinting that you think Taylor is gay? Wouldn't that be AWESOME?

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cjmarlowe December 1 2009, 22:42:18 UTC
LOL! The crystal ball in my head says there is some scandal in his future. :D Thanks!

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cydsa November 28 2009, 12:16:38 UTC
a story where the relationships already established make a believable transition to something more.

I really like the way you wrote both Adam & Kris. They were real - not larger than life. Just real.

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cjmarlowe December 1 2009, 22:42:47 UTC
Thank you so much! That's just what I hoped to do. :)

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oatmeal_cookie November 28 2009, 13:00:56 UTC
Oh wow, this is amazing. I kind of want to curl up in this fic and live in it. Not that - I know that the circumstances that the story revolves around are sad and scary and nothing that I ever want to happen in real life, but. I just. How they are with each other - they're so comfortable, and their relationship is so warm and cozy and lived-in; everything you've written here is how I see them in my head, and what I want for them in the future. That they're in and around each other's lives, always, no matter what. And not just Kris and Adam, but the other Idols too. <3

I love all of their characterizations here, but Adam most of all - so supportive, fiercely protective, not afraid to call Matt on his shit, never willing to let Kris feel guilty, shepherding the rest around and dealing with his own stuff too. He's generous and loving and beautifully flawed, it's so lovely to read. Thank you so much for this, bb. :)

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cjmarlowe December 2 2009, 05:29:07 UTC
Wow, thank you, thank you! I love the way you describe their relationship because that's just how I was thinking it was, all broken in and comfortable. I actually very rarely do all-Adam POV, so I'm really glad his characterization worked here. :D

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supergreak November 28 2009, 15:02:48 UTC
Loved it all! Best part ever: In fact, I have no idea what this red carpet is doing here. Is anyone going to take our tickets?" Just added the perfect light-hearted touch to end it.

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cjmarlowe December 2 2009, 05:29:42 UTC
Thank you! I figured he'd want to do something at that point to lighten it all up. :D

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rosiewinter November 28 2009, 16:35:14 UTC
Awww, their relationship was so beautiful. I wanted this to go on forever. ♥

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cjmarlowe December 2 2009, 05:29:56 UTC
Thanks so much! :D

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