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queenmidalah

M7 Fic: Lies Become Unraveled- 3/?

Sep 30, 2009 17:06

Title: Lies Become Unraveled
Author: Jourdana Standish
Synopsis: Ezra discovers that everything he has ever known is nothing more than a lie. How does he cope with finding out the truth about himself when a woman from his mother's past forces her to reveal the truth?
Author's Notes: This suddenly came to me and is a nice break up of the major h/c/ ( Read more... )

fandom: magnificent 7, character: ezra standish, character: mary travis, writing: lies become unraveled

Comments 6

tpena19 September 30 2009, 21:52:34 UTC

I get why Vin was so asshatish, but what got Chris' panties in a bunch? He's not sweet on Mary too is he?

Loved the end bit!

queenmidalah October 1 2009, 17:27:45 UTC

Oooh no! Chris is so not sweet on her (mostly cause I do not like that pairing LOL). No, Chris was with Vin when he saw Ezra leaving Mary's. Chris views Mary as a sister and therefore doesn't want her to be taken advantage of or her reputation put on the line.

Ezra is so going to love taking on the big brother role with Mary. He already feels a lot lighter in spirit then he has in a long time.

mystdogs October 1 2009, 00:51:46 UTC

LOL a fun chapter. Poor Inez left too early..hmm wonder how long it will be before she gets 'enlightened' too. Big brother Ezra asking Vin's intentions..LOL too funny. So I was picturing Chris as Vin's bull dog here, right on his heels and ready to back Vin up in whatever he was doing..LOL just the image cracked me up..

queenmidalah October 1 2009, 17:44:14 UTC

Yeah, I was physically mean to Ezra in both this and These Five Words, but this was more fun than the other fic. Much more lighthearted. It's going to be a bit before Inez is enlightened because she's going to avoid the hell out of Ezra and Mary till she can get a reign on her hurt feelings that shouldn't be hurt but are. Misunderstandings and all ;-)

OMG the image of Chris as a bulldog. Haha. But you are right. One with feelings for Mary and the other views her as a sister. Neither wants rumors circulating about her so yeah. Poor Ezra!

sivanshemesh October 1 2009, 06:40:42 UTC

LOL!

So, now Ezra will have to talk to him about Mary... looking forward to read it, and glad that Chris and Vin didn't apply something serious.

Keep up the great work that you are doing with your fic and update asap.

*Hugs & Kisses*

Have a great day/night and keep smiling,

Sivan Shemesh

queenmidalah October 1 2009, 17:45:01 UTC

Thank you so much. This was a fun chapter to write. Definitely a vast difference over These Five Words, which is good.