ARG! Not more "poetry"????

Apr 18, 2005 07:24

Yup, I should be studying, and instead Cory got some mediocre poetry stuck in her head.  It is a question for Bob:

Message for you this morning:
The mirror wants a word with you,
For all the things you said -
And for myself, I'd like an answer too.

Those words you spoke,
They might make me smile and sigh
An image you painted,
To make my mirror ( Read more... )

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the view from here bobthepirate_bx April 18 2005, 16:37:33 UTC
The answer is complex
explain my view from here?
if i must confess
the i'll answer your mirror

(The View From Here)

from here you're beautiful
and the worlds a mess
your image pulls
my heart to profess

that while my vision fails
and my eyes get old
i see the details
and my breathe must hold

there's truth that lies
but not like a con
it lies in my arms
of which you're upon

that though my sight is tainted
its not corrupted of you
its because of the others
blocking my beautiful view
(END)

your beautiful and i know it.
one of these days you'll admit it too
i'll prove it and i'll never quit
because i'm in love with you
~Bob~

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Re: the view from here queenstumblina April 18 2005, 21:57:50 UTC
You're stubborn and peristent
I may never know why
But as always you give me hope
And once again I'll try
To see as you do
To look life in the eye
And to tell you once again
(as you soar though the sky)
There is more to you, too
Than you'll admit!
And if to say such is a crime
It's one I'll gladly commit.

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linkcm April 18 2005, 22:56:51 UTC
Yay, it's going right back and forth with this beautiful poetry. (^_^)

**keeps at the edge of his seat**

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lilyoda April 19 2005, 02:55:46 UTC
Not more poetry...*groans from the audience*

*passes the popcorn to Carl*

beautiful poetry guyz....=D

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linkcm April 19 2005, 18:39:33 UTC
Oh, thank you, uhm...Jenny I believe? (Correct me if I'm wrong)

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lilyoda April 21 2005, 03:46:16 UTC
Yes that be my name...oh Duke of the Bunnies...

oh holy V8 vegetable bottle..

0_0!!

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drpsycho777 April 19 2005, 04:26:33 UTC
man i wish i could write poetry. i am offically jelous. every time i try i always sound like a bad dr suse.

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