The Abyss Part 1

[queenthespade]

(This is a joint work, in that David had the original inspiration for the opening scene, but in the workings of his creative process, it ended up on the cutting room floor. When he shared it with me, I was intrigued by “what happened next” and he was gracious enough to let me use it, since he no longer needed it. This takes place fairly recently

Comments

[davatkins]

Love it! Arimus is one of Pariverse's best and most unique characters, and the story you're telling here really highlights some of what she brings to the table. :) Also, its great to read your writing again! Love your 'voice.'

[queenthespade]

Thanks bro, I really appreciate the feedback. :)