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Challenge oo1 - Post Series: Sasuke/Naruto

Mar 07, 2010 13:52

Title: Dreams of the Spider
Character/Pairings: NaruSasu
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 237
Warnings: This heavily alludes to sex but I feel is not nearly descriptive enough to deserve a higher rating. All the same, those who are shy of sexual activity, beware.
Summery: Everyone politely continues the facade while behind closed doors everyone already knows ( Read more... )

challenge 001: post-series

Comments 4

faorism March 8 2010, 00:04:56 UTC

This was lovely! I love the poetic feel of your descriptions.

(And a note from one of the mods: The rating was fine. The only thing that was the matter was that you did not tag the entry, which I have done for you. Thank you for submitting.)

antiquitydreams March 8 2010, 02:43:38 UTC

Tagging? Oh god >.> it's so obvious I almost never use Lj *feels like a newb even if she has had an LJ for 7 years* T__T thank you.

ladygizarme March 8 2010, 00:44:09 UTC

snared in the web of things beyond their control as they skirted past their mortal coil by means of lucid eroticism thinly veiling a more profound emotion.

I really loved that line. &hearts This was lovely.

antiquitydreams March 8 2010, 02:44:27 UTC

Thank you! Glad you think so ^^