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[quicksand_]

i was a cigarette and you smoked
me
like nothing on a fri-
day night. we were all together at once in some
thing, some thing combustible

Comments

[abraxa]

i love this

[secreto]

I love the way you write but I think you're tired of hearing this from me so much.

[constelacion]

i love love this too, and feel this hurt too, i do.
i would avoid saying romeo

[ohwhy]

of course,
i loved this too.

[astronauts]

sunshine, can you be any more of a genius?
original, spectacular, fucking amazing poem.
nuff said

sorry i haven't been good with words lately.