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Oct 14, 2013 20:03

our kiss is a secret handshake
hongbin/hyuk, pg-13, 3440ⓦ

( When he lifts his head, peeling himself away from a sticky collarbone, Hongbin’s watching him. Dazed and warm with sleep, he almost leans up. )

vixx: hongbin/hyuk, vixx: all

Comments 18

hyemint October 15 2013, 14:16:33 UTC

oh, this was so nice to read and so wonderfully written *____* i really loved the way you conveyed the tension between hongbin and sanghyuk. just so subtle until that moMENT fhsjgdkhxjgxjgxkahhhhhh and your characterization of everyone is so great and realistic. thank you so much for sharing! <333

quid October 15 2013, 19:12:18 UTC

I was afraid it'd even be too subtle so I'm really glad the progression worked for you; thank you!

gildedarmour October 15 2013, 16:21:23 UTC

OH MY GOD
ok so i dont (didnt) even ship hongbin + sanghyuk but i was looking for nice fics to rec someone and clicked on this and couldnt stop reading i just

as Wonshik stoops down into a squat to avoid blocking the television, waddling over to the other bed with everyone’s drinks,

THIS LINE I CAN JUST
SEE
HIM
DOOING THIS I CANT
LIKE I HAD TO STOP READING TO PUT MY SERIOUS FACE BACK ON

For a moment, he looks fond. Then he gently pushes Sanghyuk’s head off so that it thumps down onto the bed.

SIGHS LOUDLY ABOUT HOW PERFECT THIS IS

WONSHIK IN A GREGORIAN CHANT I'M FUCKING SHITTING MYSELF

i'm sorry i like to spazz about interactions and i just LIKE ALL OF THE RELATIONSHIPS BETWEEN EVERYONE WAS LIKE PERFECT??? i'm just
SIGHS

this is so nice screech

quid October 15 2013, 19:15:38 UTC

Ship converts, I can admit that this is what I wanted most ; n ; I'm really glad you liked Wonshik in this because I was definitely most worried about his characterisation! Thank you so much for this cute comment ♡

dreamy_state October 15 2013, 17:41:14 UTC

JESUS FUCK
i'm sorry but this is just so good
i have a sweet spot for hyukbin and this was so nice and- i believe i lost my ability to write a decent coment.
this is great uwu

quid October 15 2013, 19:16:54 UTC

I'm so happy people like them! Thank you for reading :)

citrus_sarang October 17 2013, 03:32:50 UTC

*breathes heavily* this was so adorable i wanna cuddle with this fic forever.

but no i really liked how you characterized everyone and there was a simplicity about this i really enjoyed. it was wonderful and made me laugh and i loved this <33

quid October 17 2013, 21:16:47 UTC

Thanks so much, I'm so glad it could make you laugh!