(Untitled)

Jan 07, 2014 00:31

melt your cold, cold heart
baekhyun/d.o, g, 335ⓦ

Not exactly their finest moment, Kyungsoo thinks wryly, rubbing a palm over his knee. )

exo: all, exo: baekhyun/d.o

Leave a comment

Comments 8

colorfunk January 7 2014, 16:28:14 UTC
oh my godd best huddling for warmth trope interpretation i could hope for His body heat percolates through to Kyungsoo’s side, who tries to lean into it discreetly. Baekhyun grins when he notices. “You’re lucky you have me,” he says, a little smug. the happiness of my sigh when i read this, the happiest sigh!!! obvs i love powers but i love them most when they're big abilities being used in little ways, tenderness amidst violence, tenderness WITHIN VIOLENCE "Warmth blooms in his chest at the way Baekhyun’s eyes light up in the love of a good fight." BYUN BAEKHYUN NO

“Hmm,” Kyungsoo says, unconvinced. lmao seminal baeksoo

ps like a line on a Richter scale. this is a greaaat visual

pps a villain named THE ABOMINABLE SNOWMAN such a perfect comic book touch omfg i'm the one who's lucky to have you!! ♥

Reply

quid January 8 2014, 01:04:06 UTC
I spent more time waffling about how to go about it than actually writing it, but a chance for pcy to show his quality and Baekhyun to put the moves on Kyungsoo, obviously the only choice (ღ˘⌣˘ღ)

Your comments are always so cute!! Thank you for the compliments, my face hurts from smiling (っ˘̩╭╮˘̩)っ

Reply


jojibear January 7 2014, 20:51:06 UTC
This was kind of wonderful )*O*(

Reply

quid January 8 2014, 01:04:27 UTC
thank you!

Reply


cho_sungmin January 7 2014, 22:10:24 UTC
that was really interesting and I'd like to read more *A*

Reply

quid January 8 2014, 01:05:24 UTC
ah maybe, superpowers is always a theme I'm looking to revisit! Thank you for reading :)

Reply


oneiric_dreams January 10 2014, 15:19:10 UTC
this was just lovely~ the way you dived into the fic without any backstory and yet it's all there, and then there's this little baeksoo moment while Chanyeol's probably having all the action. And I love the last sentence, the imagery of how they manifest their powers with the lightest movements:)

Reply

quid January 12 2014, 07:11:02 UTC
Thank you so much for such a lovely comment ; o ; I fussed with the last sentence for a long time as I've not written something so short in a while, so I'm really glad it worked for you!

Reply


Leave a comment

Up