I love, love, love your writing - it's always so beautiful. So soft and heavy at the same time. It was so quiet and progressed so gently, but I really enjoyed being taken on that ride.
this might be a bit confusing, but i'm going to comment from this account since i've abandoned the one above, i hope you don't mind.
First - I'd like to say THANK YOU so so much (no playing tag this time, I promise haha)for writing this for me. I know it was done because of a donation and I had won the bid and all, but I just really really admire you as a writer style and find your style and writing as a whole to be delicate and poetic. It is such an honor to have something written by you being to dedicated to me, regardless of the circumstance and I can't thank you enough (but I will, you can call freeze tag again this time hahaha). I, uhm, just wanted to make sure you knew that :)
Second - My way of appreciating a piece of writing is by quoting and leaving as much opinion and love as possible with accompanying response. I hope you don't mind since, considering this is minkey and well you writing this, there will be plenty of both :)
Now, on with the real time reading and commenting... i actually read this once before to enjoy
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When he's asked about his first kiss, Minho glances sidelong at Kibum, who is leaning by the door, looking bored, absent-minded fingers toying with his necklace. ---This is how I imagine Key to be! Nonchalant façade veiling truth. I'm really enjoying your characterization! It's so spot on!
I'm very much at risk of quoting everything back to you. Forgive me ;__;
Kibum's spacing out backstage - hurray of Olde Europe referencing!
Kibum blinks at him, as if he is waking up from one dream to another. ---Always ♥
Minho takes a breath, hesitates, and Kibum looks away. ---THE.TENSION. I SEE IT. I LOVE IT. I totally just imagined Key's vision going static like those t.v. channels with no signal as soon as he looks away.
Ok uhm *has to google Thierry Henry* OH HAHA I THOUGHT IT WAS ALCOHOL OR A BOOK. HAHA. *ahem*
[insert last two paragraphs] ---I NEEDED THIS. BECAUSE AS I'VE SAID BEFORE I'M SLOW AT CATCHING ON TO THINGS. SO THIS CLARIFICATION IS MUCHLY APPRECIATED. But gosh :( I don't know who to feel
( ... )
oh also! out of curiosity (and i'm sorry if i'm missing out on the painfully obvious .__.) which of my prompts did you use? :D was it the flowers? :D i'm excited to know :D hahah
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Thank you for being so brilliant ♥
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I was needing some MinKey inspiration, and this is perfect. And sad, and real, and lovely.
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this might be a bit confusing, but i'm going to comment from this account since i've abandoned the one above, i hope you don't mind.
First - I'd like to say THANK YOU so so much (no playing tag this time, I
promise haha)for writing this for me. I know it was done because of a
donation and I had won the bid and all, but I just really really
admire you as a writer style and find your style and writing as a whole to
be delicate and poetic. It is such an honor to have something written
by you being to dedicated to me, regardless of the circumstance and I can't
thank you enough (but I will, you can call freeze tag again this time
hahaha). I, uhm, just wanted to make sure you knew that :)
Second - My way of appreciating a piece of writing is by quoting and
leaving as much opinion and love as possible with accompanying response. I
hope you don't mind since, considering this is minkey and well you
writing this, there will be plenty of both :)
Now, on with the real time reading and commenting...
i actually read this once before to enjoy ( ... )
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When he's asked about his first kiss, Minho glances sidelong at Kibum,
who is leaning by the door, looking bored, absent-minded fingers toying with
his necklace.
---This is how I imagine Key to be! Nonchalant façade veiling truth. I'm
really enjoying your characterization! It's so spot on!
I'm very much at risk of quoting everything back to you. Forgive me ;__;
Kibum's spacing out backstage - hurray of Olde Europe referencing!
Kibum blinks at him, as if he is waking up from one dream to another.
---Always ♥
Minho takes a breath, hesitates, and Kibum looks away.
---THE.TENSION. I SEE IT. I LOVE IT.
I totally just imagined Key's vision going static like those t.v. channels
with no signal as soon as he looks away.
Ok uhm *has to google Thierry Henry* OH HAHA I THOUGHT IT WAS
ALCOHOL OR A BOOK. HAHA. *ahem*
[insert last two paragraphs]
---I NEEDED THIS. BECAUSE AS I'VE SAID BEFORE I'M
SLOW AT CATCHING ON TO THINGS. SO THIS CLARIFICATION IS
MUCHLY APPRECIATED. But gosh :( I don't know who to feel ( ... )
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