Slowly, Seunghyun reaches an arm around Jiyong, fingers curling around the back of Jiyong's shirt, and whispers it to him again, there's nowhere to go except to you curling into the warm shell of his ear. This line is really beautiful.
oh god look at you asnelkngsnals ;u; i knew you could do it!
you are wonderful and this is perfect and lovely. the words you use set the scene so perfectly. i love gd's dream, and how he wakes up and tries to compensate ;_;. and i love, i looove the image that comes to mind with He'd always imagined the world ending in the same way as ink in water: explosive, tendrils of black consuming everything in sight. and that whole paragraph. and how you chose to end it. it's so grim, but the ending is so open and so full of love and hope. i am not deserving of this dedication!! cries at you. thank you so much ♥
This is the nicest comment ever :'( You pointed out all the parts I liked writing best, so I'm really happy you liked them too! and you deserve everything good, all right ♥ Thank you for having faith in me, hehe!
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This line is really beautiful.
Thanks for sharing.
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you are wonderful and this is perfect and lovely. the words you use set the scene so perfectly. i love gd's dream, and how he wakes up and tries to compensate ;_;. and i love, i looove the image that comes to mind with He'd always imagined the world ending in the same way as ink in water: explosive, tendrils of black consuming everything in sight. and that whole paragraph. and how you chose to end it. it's so grim, but the ending is so open and so full of love and hope. i am not deserving of this dedication!! cries at you. thank you so much ♥
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