i'm sorry i'm late! hello :D and thank you for the dedication!
anyway i love post-apocalyptic fic so i saw the quote and started reading and like, ugh idk i just. :'). i really like how atmospheric this is, how pretty the language is while the world has basically fallen apart around them. and i love lines like this: Seunghyun's fingers are curled loosely around Jiyong's wrist, his head a warm, familiar weight against Jiyong's collarbone, they're so tactile and most are such small little touches but they mean so much. and of course i'm going to echo summer about the ending, how did you make me hopeful for them in the future when there's just ash and smoke and nothing anywhere. unfair lmao ;_;
You're not late at all! haha, I'm sorry, I think I'm just incapable of unhappy endings :') but I'm really glad you liked it! and I haven't said it properly (I don't know if Summer actually said who I was, so sorry if this is awkward) but thank you for putting everything together for me ♥
ahh if only the end of my world was beautiful like this... a Seunghyun to hold wouldn't be too much to ask for, would it?
Where did he go, though? Before he came back and decided he didn't want to know the future? (Cos without you the future means nothing)
Ah, GTOP is my favourite by far. And you do the drifting between alertness and dreams far too well - I get a good sense of Jiyong slipping between the two, neither here nor there... and I want to be there too, slipping between the fictions of TOP holding my hand and waking up to see... er well there's nothing to see where I am. But you get what I mean. :)
Oh, he went to retrieve the radio initially, and then just kept walking - there really isn't much left, so he didn't go anywhere in particular. Thank you for reading; I'm really glad you liked the 'drifting' aspect! :)
I don't read much outside of my main fandom but this. ♥ And I love you, if only because you quoted The Hollow Men. (But I obviously love you for more than just that, haha.)
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anyway i love post-apocalyptic fic so i saw the quote and started reading and like, ugh idk i just. :'). i really like how atmospheric this is, how pretty the language is while the world has basically fallen apart around them. and i love lines like this: Seunghyun's fingers are curled loosely around Jiyong's wrist, his head a warm, familiar weight against Jiyong's collarbone, they're so tactile and most are such small little touches but they mean so much. and of course i'm going to echo summer about the ending, how did you make me hopeful for them in the future when there's just ash and smoke and nothing anywhere. unfair lmao ;_;
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Where did he go, though? Before he came back and decided he didn't want to know the future? (Cos without you the future means nothing)
Ah, GTOP is my favourite by far. And you do the drifting between alertness and dreams far too well - I get a good sense of Jiyong slipping between the two, neither here nor there... and I want to be there too, slipping between the fictions of TOP holding my hand and waking up to see... er well there's nothing to see where I am. But you get what I mean. :)
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And I love you, if only because you quoted The Hollow Men.
(But I obviously love you for more than just that, haha.)
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