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thirty-minute writing exercises

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[shirahimejj]

ooh, I like the first one! Lulay~ White Rabbit~~ Piano~ Not being able to find the rice is tragic, but what are the odds he's found the rice cooker? XD Would not mind reading more of that.

I like the use of their powers in the second one (silly boys!), but I admit I'm not sure what's finite about them? (sorry, sleep-deprived...)

Krystal being bratty in the last one just amuses me... ^_^;;;

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in re: the second, it's not your fault; I didn't really get to the full explanation in time, but the idea was that their powers aren't limited, and they didn't realise. Lu Han not being able to perform the more difficult or 'consuming' acts of telekinesis, as well as not feeling the ramifications of extensive use, means that he's slowly losing or 'running out of' his powers.

Thank you for reading!

[tyreling]

These are really pretty. I like the part where Yixing catches Lu Han eating White rabbit. Ahaha and he couldn't find the rice? Oh god, Yixing, you precious bb. Or did Yifan's handwriting looked too illegible to understand?

The gen fic was cute too.

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Thank you for reading and commenting! :)

[mangafanxd]

a;lkfjsd the piano one is so cute!! at risk of repeating the previous commenters, these were all really precious and wonderful~

you won't be extending? aww. but thank you for sharing! ^__^

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I doubt it, sorry! and no, thank you ♥

[skullchi]

your lolita is absurdly perfect. i am in love with the krystal in your world because i think that's the krystal the real krystal would aspire to be if she was living in a fantasy world.

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ahh, thank you! haha, I don't know if there's anything to aspire to - I just wanted to write her being a normal teenager! but thank you so much ♥

[geniaux]

your writing is so beautiful, honestly, i wish you'd write more ♥
i particularly like the luhan/lay, it's so sweet

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I do have a few in progress (and I just posted one)! Thank you so much ♥