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Feb 22, 2013 14:44

the kids are all right
taemin + kai, pg, 4005ⓦ

( For months they had danced together, synchronised like divers, so that Jongin, meaning to track his own reflection, would find himself looking at Taemin's. )

shinee: all, crossover: taemin/kai, exo: all

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tiggie0307 February 22 2013, 07:59:21 UTC

This was beauiful. Thats all I can say

quid February 24 2013, 05:56:04 UTC

Thank you so much :)

luhanz February 22 2013, 13:26:13 UTC

^ agreed, i feel like you were able to portray their friendship so well in the little moments. i enjoyed the part with moonkyu, too. thank you for sharing!

quid February 24 2013, 05:57:40 UTC

ahh, thank you, that part was definitely a bit of a challenge seeing how little we know about Moonkyu, but it was still one of my favourite parts to write. :)

waterdropworld February 22 2013, 15:28:39 UTC

I found myself going "aaaaaw" at so many parts. Great job!

quid February 24 2013, 05:57:50 UTC

Thank you!

sansunparapluie February 22 2013, 16:36:31 UTC

So. Cake. A different cake than the crumbs but a cake nonetheless.
I'm not being stingy but I can't quite assemble much more of a sensical comment.

Have a heart. ♥
(Although I might have been offering these out a little too often in recent days...)

quid February 24 2013, 06:00:14 UTC

ugh, would it be really bad if I said I've given up on every single one of those wips... thank you for reading, though!

sansunparapluie February 24 2013, 16:02:41 UTC

you're my heart heart heart heart heartbreaker... you suck. =A= I was really looking forward to the inception au. /cries.
as emotional compensation, I demand that you write moar!

freefallskyline February 23 2013, 21:41:53 UTC

this is so lovely! thank you, darling ( ... )

quid February 24 2013, 05:55:34 UTC

You are the best for picking up on everything I was trying to portray - they are such perfect foils for each other and I really feel like Taemin is the person that, to Jongin, both represents his potential and his hopes when looking ahead and, looking back, what he wanted for himself, and at the same time Taemin is the only person he can't really be jealous of, or begrudge, not just because he knows exactly what it took Taemin to get there, but also out of love for him. And Taemin is so endearingly pleased and happy for Jongin, and to have Jongin with him. Even with everything in flux, they're always able to fall back on things, on their history, so that even when they fall prey to that teenage kind of inability to communicate, to meet the other person halfway and/or in the right way, there's a kind of security, a foundation to their relationship, so that they're always comfortable with each other, and can come to understand each other (better ( ... )