Never is a Promise (Bellatrix/Lily)

[quid_snidget]

Title: Never Is A Promise
Author: Quid Snidget
Genre: Angst
Pairing: Lily/Bellatrix
Summary: Bellatrix and Lily try to say goodbye for the last time.

Author Notes: I haven't posted anything in a while, I guess I was feeling masochistic when I wrote this.

Comments

[la_dissonance]

Oh, interesting... this is a Bella I've never seen before. I would have said OOC, even, but she seems to be quite unbalanced verging on all-out mad, so I don't know. And it's quite possible that she only shows this more tender side around Lily...hmm! *is intrigued* The dynamic between these two is fascinating and I can see all sorts of hints at what their relationship used to be. Great job!

[quid_snidget]

Thanks! It was kind of written on a whim, I'm glad it turned out okay. I really wanted to give it a nostalgic feeling so I'm excited it poked through a little!

[kiskafalair]

This is so sad!

The argument between them is quite realistic, which is rare in fanfiction. (At least, in my opinion).

I can't wait until you write Lily's POV so I can see what happened.

[quid_snidget]

Thanks so much! I'm really glad the argument didn't seem forced. I tried to keep it as natural as possible.
I hope you like Lily's POV too!! (or possibly even better) :D

[labstractl]

reading this story made me want to know more.. I like this side of lily. I hope you continue =]

[quid_snidget]

I'm happy to have captured your attention! Lily is definitely lovely and full of surprises. <3

[theagonyofblank]

You have me rooted to the spot! I can't wait to read Lily's POV and what happened.

[quid_snidget]

I'm sorry it's so delayed! :(
I wasn't feeling confident with it at all but now I think I'm satisfied with it enough to give it to the public :D
I hope you like it!