2nd confession (xiuhun, pg)

Feb 14, 2015 01:51

Title: 2nd Confession
Paring: Xiuhun and obvious Kaisoo
Rating: PG
Word Count: 5400
Summary: Love sure does make people do weird things. In which Sehun's a creep, but an adorable creep. Er, kind of.

Love sure does make people do weird things. )

au, writing fluff is difficult for me ok, this was absolutely terribly fluff/humor, i don't even know really, pairing:xiuhun, a+ for effort

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fairyminseok February 14 2015, 09:32:31 UTC
the fuck is this

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fairyminseok February 14 2015, 09:35:12 UTC
I had to stop reading like six times due to SUPREME SECONDHAND EMBARRASSMENT FOR SEHUN
but fucking this is so cute I'm actually disgusted what the heck tisoo

Sehun's reactions to Minseok teaching and his dancing and him dkhjeasgDhkljsglhjk HAHAH hes so cute Im so i am

Soft fingers thread their way through Sehun’s hair tug Sehun down and closer.

“Close your eyes,” is the only warning he gets and he closes without really knowing why. But he finally connects two and two when Minseok leans in and whispers, “and this is my confession to you.”

There’s an eruption of screams that sound when Minseok presses his lips to Sehun’s lips and his heart’s saying yes before his mouth.
FIGHTY MEEEE THISI SI SO GOOD

I can't coherently comment I don't know what's spewing from my mind right now i m so sory

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quiescentme February 15 2015, 18:45:39 UTC
this is so cute I'm actually disgusted what the heck tisoo HAHAH IM DISGU STED TOO

FIGHTY MEEEE THISI SI SO GOOD <3 thank you~

its ok. this entire fic was spew LOL

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quiescentme February 15 2015, 18:44:18 UTC
omG HAHA

my reaction exactly

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yunsias February 14 2015, 10:24:13 UTC
LMAOOOO I'M DEAD.

I laughed so much while reading because Sehun is just so embarrassing and poor Jongin who has to tolerate him without stuffing him into a trash can (because that's what I would do ngl). I can't even quote anything because it would just be me quoting the whole fucking fic, everything made me laughed.

His admirable, pure senior transform from petite cuteness to pure sin
pURE? PURE? KIM MINSEOK COMES FROM HELL, WHAT MAKES SEHUN THINK THAT HE IS PURE

Yixang or Yaxing or something or another. ... Yiding replies... Yixong, that was it."
sEHUN PLS

I think I'll stop here because the rest of the comments are just "What Sehun no, please love yourself" and "Sehun, you're such a Minseok-trash" but this is so so so so good and you should write funny fics more often!

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quiescentme February 15 2015, 18:48:46 UTC
THANK YOUUUUU I WAS TRYING TO AIM FOR HUMOR. ;U;

SEHUN'S DELUSIONAL OK LET THE POOR BOY HAVE HIS DREAMS in the trash can

butchering xings name was more amusing to me than it should have been.

difidsfjo "What Sehun no, please love yourself" and "Sehun, you're such a Minseok-trash" WE ARE MINSEOK TRASH HAHA

/u\ ah thank you and i might try again! i had a lot of fun writing it and cringing the whole way through :D

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xiukisses February 14 2015, 14:40:19 UTC
spot ♡

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xiukisses February 14 2015, 17:03:06 UTC
okay first of all tHE BEANSPROUT COMMENT OMFG I LAUGHED ISTG AND THEN SEHUN BEING ALL AISVANLFN AOIFNA ABOUT MINSEOK OH MY GD HE IS SO EMBARRASSING AND CUTE WTF

my favorite part was this especially the bolded because LM AO

But when Minseok shows that dance the first time for the class Sehun’s eyes nearly pop out of his head. His admirable, pure senior transform from petite cuteness to pure sin. Minseok makes bedroom eyes at the mirror, his breathing going deep and that constant little smile twists into a smirk and Sehun’s heart goes racing.

He hadn’t siGNED UP FOR THIS.

all the kaisoo was so wonderful and i think i might be in heaven
also the yixong? yixang? yoxing? omfg tisoo

i cant i just cant okay especially at the soccer match when sehun was sCREAMING HIS HEAD OFF

ugh

UGH
YOU ARE TERRIBLE ilu

THE KISS TISOO TE KISS ALSO JUST MINSEOK EBIN GSO FUCKING //ENDEARED// BY SEHUNS STRANGE WATS I CANNOT

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quiescentme February 15 2015, 18:52:43 UTC
YOUR COMMENT, BUUUBUU IM ;U;

I LOVE CALLING TALL PEOPLE BEANSPROUT BEANSPROUTS GROW FAST AND SKINNY SO SEHUNS A BEANSPROUT.

yesy es butchering yixings name made me giggle like how many times can i make alternate spellings.

YES IM TERRIBLE AND I LOVE YOU THIS WAS FOR YOU

THE KISS IS ONE OF MY FAV PARTS AND I WAS DETERMINED TO MAKE MINSEOK ALL SMOOTH AND SUAVE bc thats like sheuns dream fantasy of him and i must not tell him that santa claus doesnt exist. hes a baby he doesnt deserve that pain.

thank you for reading, precious jenn <3

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xiukisses February 16 2015, 20:24:35 UTC
does this mean im a beansprout

i am sehun there is no contesting this

I LOVE YOU TOO MY TISOOKITTY omg baby sehunnie

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misszhangyixing February 16 2015, 02:43:21 UTC
Wtf man wtf sehun you're so embarrassing but cute????
I had to stop reading for a few times because wow such embarassment!!!!!

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quiescentme February 17 2015, 04:11:09 UTC
I KNO W RIGHT

HAHAHA YES sehun is embarassment fic or rl >U

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naegastar February 16 2015, 06:29:09 UTC
SEHUN YOU ADORABLY EMBARRASSING CREATURE.

God so much about this was great but omg, Sehun pretending to take selfies when he was actually taking pics of Minseok and then his cheering and banner for the soccer game I was literally dying.

And omg of course Minseok dances like a stripper, he probably amped it up since Sehun was in the class. Tease.

The end was super cute though and Kaisoo are probably like "fucking finally now we can be done with you two pining for each other" sobs this is adorbs ♥

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quiescentme February 17 2015, 04:13:55 UTC
^^ thank you for the cute comment!! ehehehe yes yes sehunnie is so cute and embarassing and so endearing.

HAHA YES KAISOO r like 'pls dont make out in front of us'

thank you for reading and commenting! ;u;

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