but actually this is good and poetic and i love your writing, you have such an acute way with the words, i wish you will take me under your wings senpai~
minseok giggles, a childish one that’s full of innocence. he’s 3, at that age where he’ll hold up 3 stubby fingers and proudly announce that he’s three and three quarters.
THIS IS SO CUTE IM HSHSGSSFSFFS
minseok giggles when a snowflake lands and melts on his nose and he shrieks with giddy joy. his mother keeps a careful eye on him as she sips tea from the front porch.
SO CUTE HOW I WISH I WAS THE MOTHER
“minseok, oh god, not this, no,” she begs to no one. there’s this infinite sadness in her eyes that gives way to resignation as she calls her child to her and minseok toddles back his mother and into her arms, his snow tornadoes collapsing to the ground.
i feel so u_u
she gathers him close and looks him in the face, at his baby fat cheeks, his sparkling eyes full of glee, his ruddy nose. “my precious, oh you have such a powerful gift but a it’s cold and lonesome one. find someone you love and hold tight to them,” she whispers into his snow kissed hair and he nods, unsure in his young mind what his mother’s saying to him but he
( ... )
minseok grins, uninhibited and full of joy. he’s yelling into the sky because it seems miles and miles away as he soars through the sky on a phoenix’s back. he feels free and he’s surrounded by people he loves. minseok’s 20 when he thinks that maybe he isn’t so lonely anymore.
IM SO :) BECAUSE MINSEOK FEELS THAT WAY ㅋ
there’s sehun, youngest, lanky kid that looks like he gives no fucks, coinciding with his wind manipulation, but really gives all the fucks. there’s jongin, second youngest, who’s gorgeous in his perpetual daze, teleportation at his hand. then there’s zitao, who’s 2nd tallest, and is a wielder of time, and uses it to his advantage. he’s the one who’s the most volatile but then there’s kyungsoo, who’s a few months older than tao but he’s the one who knows how to calm down the other. it sometimes looks funny, little kyungsoo always dressed in black (it makes him look even smaller, jongin tells him) pulling zitao down to whisper in his ear in soothing tones and a gentle pat always to be given. but kyungsoo’s explosive in
( ... )
minseok is 25 when he shouts back at luhan, something stupid, anger boiling at his words, heart hurt by his words. it’s not the first time someone’s told him that he’s got a cold heart, but it’s the first time luhan’s told him and he thinks for the first time that they might be right.
IM SCREAMING AT YOU ((((IM IN PAIN THANK YOU))))
and luhan leaves him.
MAKES ME FEEL WORST- IM LEAVING-
they’re falling apart. this once inseparable group of friend, who bonded together by their loneliness and shared joy, laughter, and friendship with each other. it begins when kris leaves.
kris goes back to his native land, the first to be able to control his power and it crushes joonmyun but he accepts it. he accepts it because there’s not like there’s anything that joonmyun can do to change kris’ mind, his country needs him more than joonmyun and that’s the end of that. kris leaves.
((((((ㅠㅠㅠ)))))))
they’re shaky but they carry on. then it creeps into the cracks and splitter them a little bit more and minseok and luhan are no longer luhan and
( ... )
MIAAAAAAAAA HOLY SHIIIIIT THIS IS LIKE THE MOST AMAZING GIFT YOU COULD GIVE ME I'M-- O<--< THIS IS AN AMAZING COMMENT THE MOST AMAZING, YOU ARE AMAZING
weeps i don't even know where to start but god so many parts this made me giggle or snort or throw my head back and laugh. it was great. i enjoyed it. and of course, the little bits like ((((IM IN PAIN THANK YOU)))) made me want to pat you on the head all like 'i know, i know....'
I DONT KNOW HOW TO SAY BUT I REALLY LOVE YOUR WRITING TECHNIQUE SENPAI I LOVE HOW U DESCRIBE THINGS AND PERSONALITIES I LOVE HOW U BROKE MY HEART AND COMES BACK JUST TO MEND IT SAVES IT FOREVER, PRINTS IT OUT AND STAPLES TO MY WALL ;;;A;; MIAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
okay this is just a drabble for you but i guess it's everything to me. thanks for writing this <3 everything to you omg but yes, you are also a benefactor of this fic. you reminded me how compelled i am to write xiuhan orz
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I'M GOING TO PUKE ON EVERYTHING YOU LOVE
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but actually this is good and poetic and i love your writing, you have such an acute way with the words, i wish you will take me under your wings senpai~
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i think i commented this a few weeks ago but my ljs been...wonky
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This is sad and beautyful all at the same time and I love it!!! Thank you (:
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this is?????? ouch??????
in a good way but also???? ow????
also i rly like that little hint if taosoo dynamic ack
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:D i don't heavily ship taosoo but i thought i'd give 93 line a cameo hehe, i'm glad you enjoyed it
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THIS IS SO CUTE IM HSHSGSSFSFFS
minseok giggles when a snowflake lands and melts on his nose and he shrieks with giddy joy. his mother keeps a careful eye on him as she sips tea from the front porch.
SO CUTE HOW I WISH I WAS THE MOTHER
“minseok, oh god, not this, no,” she begs to no one. there’s this infinite sadness in her eyes that gives way to resignation as she calls her child to her and minseok toddles back his mother and into her arms, his snow tornadoes collapsing to the ground.
i feel so u_u
she gathers him close and looks him in the face, at his baby fat cheeks, his sparkling eyes full of glee, his ruddy nose. “my precious, oh you have such a powerful gift but a it’s cold and lonesome one. find someone you love and hold tight to them,” she whispers into his snow kissed hair and he nods, unsure in his young mind what his mother’s saying to him but he ( ... )
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IM SO :) BECAUSE MINSEOK FEELS THAT WAY ㅋ
there’s sehun, youngest, lanky kid that looks like he gives no fucks, coinciding with his wind manipulation, but really gives all the fucks. there’s jongin, second youngest, who’s gorgeous in his perpetual daze, teleportation at his hand. then there’s zitao, who’s 2nd tallest, and is a wielder of time, and uses it to his advantage. he’s the one who’s the most volatile but then there’s kyungsoo, who’s a few months older than tao but he’s the one who knows how to calm down the other. it sometimes looks funny, little kyungsoo always dressed in black (it makes him look even smaller, jongin tells him) pulling zitao down to whisper in his ear in soothing tones and a gentle pat always to be given. but kyungsoo’s explosive in ( ... )
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IM SCREAMING AT YOU ((((IM IN PAIN THANK YOU))))
and luhan leaves him.
MAKES ME FEEL WORST- IM LEAVING-
they’re falling apart. this once inseparable group of friend, who bonded together by their loneliness and shared joy, laughter, and friendship with each other. it begins when kris leaves.
kris goes back to his native land, the first to be able to control his power and it crushes joonmyun but he accepts it. he accepts it because there’s not like there’s anything that joonmyun can do to change kris’ mind, his country needs him more than joonmyun and that’s the end of that. kris leaves.
((((((ㅠㅠㅠ)))))))
they’re shaky but they carry on. then it creeps into the cracks and splitter them a little bit more and minseok and luhan are no longer luhan and ( ... )
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weeps i don't even know where to start but god so many parts this made me giggle or snort or throw my head back and laugh. it was great. i enjoyed it. and of course, the little bits like ((((IM IN PAIN THANK YOU)))) made me want to pat you on the head all like 'i know, i know....'
I DONT KNOW HOW TO SAY BUT I REALLY LOVE YOUR WRITING TECHNIQUE SENPAI
I LOVE HOW U DESCRIBE THINGS AND PERSONALITIES
I LOVE HOW U BROKE MY HEART AND COMES BACK JUST TO MEND IT SAVES IT FOREVER, PRINTS IT OUT AND STAPLES TO MY WALL ;;;A;; MIAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
okay this is just a drabble for you but i guess it's everything to me.
thanks for writing this <3 everything to you omg but yes, you are also a benefactor of this fic. you reminded me how compelled i am to write xiuhan orz
ps how does one sob lowkey
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